Recent Comments

10/6/21, 11:05 PM
I agree that Isaac should get some payback for Connor taking it so far. And I wonder what else they can change before they get fired! Hahaha, fun story

10/7/21, 11:18 AM
@Razz TFs Glad you enjoyed <3 Maybe payback is due. Honestly i was just gonna make a short epilogue with isaac still dumb but these comments r giving me inspiration
Malefiscar
10/6/21, 8:58 PM
I love this so much!! dumbing down stories are so much fun to read and this one was a wonderful addition to that genre. I do hope Isaac gets his revenge in the epilogue you mentioned though, to make them even. Seems like Connor has it coming haha

10/7/21, 11:17 AM
@Malefiscar Thank you so much! Dumbing down stories r so exciting for me especially when taken to the max
EntrancedGay92
10/7/21, 9:29 AM
Not usually my cup of tea but this was a good story. I would have liked to see some more obvious mind control (like a subliminal recruitment video or something). Living near a military base, it has sort-of been a fantasy of mine to be recruited like this.
10/7/21, 7:35 AM
I enjoyed this! Nice and strange.
Daniel
10/7/21, 7:29 AM
love using the pre as a hypnotic love potion, don't make the conversion so easy man I.J.S.
Daniel
10/7/21, 7:20 AM
not sure about the slow burn dude, but I'm willing to see where you're headed I.J.S.
Daniel
10/7/21, 7:12 AM
don't let the contamination become perfunctory, the devil is in the details dude ! I.J.S.
Daniel
10/7/21, 7:04 AM
uh huh...think I like where you're headed bud, don't disappoint me...I.J.S.
Daniel
10/7/21, 6:54 AM
ok dude, let's see where we're going. corruption, struggle is the name of the game. I.J.S.
10/7/21, 3:16 AM
Wouldn't be a real himbo story without a happy, silly, sexy ending.