Recent Comments

10/6/21, 9:03 PM
Also I super like the part where your main guy seems to be gaining abilities as he takes over others while at the same time NOT harming the other - like its not mentioned that when he took the frat president and got some muscle the frat president lost any muscle. So its positives without harming and I love that. This is a really interesting and sexy setup. The nature of the powers that seem to exist is totally fun, as is our guy taking over a frat. Super hot and sexy. Love how he is a dom top and that is our focus. Hope he continues to dominate and win.
10/6/21, 8:55 PM
Nice, very very sexy and nice and hot. Loved this.
Anonymous
10/6/21, 8:54 PM
Thanks I loved the first part. Can't wait for the next par
10/6/21, 8:46 PM
Reread this before new chapter. So sexy.
Anonymous
10/6/21, 8:42 PM
This is one of the hottest stories I've ever read, I can't wait to see more of stepdaddy! Hopefully he breaks and breeds Sammy's boi pussy
10/6/21, 7:09 PM
I'd like to see some more. Mr. Critchfield.
10/6/21, 6:44 PM
Love this story! Can't wait to see how Eddie will end up...
Anonymous
10/6/21, 6:34 PM
I can't wait for the next chapter..
10/6/21, 6:33 PM
I'm curious as to how he will be able to return to work and act enough like his old self to ensnare more cops.
boi98229
10/6/21, 6:25 PM
I enjoyed this as well! i loved the fast loss-of-control from worried student to "Roman" slave-gimp-mannequin. Jack's thoughts and the dialog between the designer and his assistant carried the story well. It's too bad that some reviewers can take the time to be critical but can't bother themselves to say why. Since Anonymous has nothing useful or kind to say, perhaps he could use some mannequin experience in this incredible Roman slave exhibit i've heard great things about. ;)) If i were to make any suggestion, it would be to see more detailed description of Jack's loss of control particularly from Jack's point of view, more character development and a longer story! When i find a good story, i don't want it to end! Nevertheless it works well just as it is. Thanks for sharing!