Recent Comments

10/6/21, 7:09 PM
I'd like to see some more. Mr. Critchfield.
10/6/21, 6:44 PM
Love this story! Can't wait to see how Eddie will end up...
Anonymous
10/6/21, 6:34 PM
I can't wait for the next chapter..
10/6/21, 6:33 PM
I'm curious as to how he will be able to return to work and act enough like his old self to ensnare more cops.
boi98229
10/6/21, 6:25 PM
I enjoyed this as well! i loved the fast loss-of-control from worried student to "Roman" slave-gimp-mannequin. Jack's thoughts and the dialog between the designer and his assistant carried the story well. It's too bad that some reviewers can take the time to be critical but can't bother themselves to say why. Since Anonymous has nothing useful or kind to say, perhaps he could use some mannequin experience in this incredible Roman slave exhibit i've heard great things about. ;)) If i were to make any suggestion, it would be to see more detailed description of Jack's loss of control particularly from Jack's point of view, more character development and a longer story! When i find a good story, i don't want it to end! Nevertheless it works well just as it is. Thanks for sharing!
10/6/21, 4:02 PM
YEEEEAAAAAHHHHH! This story is back! And I love it, I did not expect this idea!
Anonymous
10/6/21, 3:10 PM
another great chapter... loving the thrill of the chase!!!
10/6/21, 1:52 PM
Ooh, an interesting twist! I also like the explanation of Eduardo's ESL status keeping him slightly immune to the songs, and it's always fun to see the classic Hypnothrill "One character realizes what's changing the others" trope. Also, it's good to know that hard drugs can be used as resistance against mind control. I'll have to remember that. :p Great story, Hypnothrill!

10/6/21, 2:33 PM
@Feed Your Head Well, Eduardo *thinks* that hard drugs can be used as resistance against mind control. We'll just have to wait and see whether he's right or not. ;-)
Anonymous
10/6/21, 2:02 AM
the haircut part was amazing, i hope to see more like it! how short did he cut allistair's hair?

10/6/21, 1:40 PM
I never even thought to describe it. I was thinking #2 Razor? Short but not bald. I'll need to see if I can fit that i to the next chapter somewhere.
Martin
10/5/21, 9:38 PM
Such a cute and hot story... one both feels sad and happy for Nate at the same time :)

10/6/21, 12:39 PM
It’s always an honour when you read my stories, heh. I’m glad you liked it! More is coming, and Nate’s story has some unfolding to do. @Martin