Recent Comments

Anonymous
10/6/21, 3:10 PM
another great chapter... loving the thrill of the chase!!!
10/6/21, 1:52 PM
Ooh, an interesting twist! I also like the explanation of Eduardo's ESL status keeping him slightly immune to the songs, and it's always fun to see the classic Hypnothrill "One character realizes what's changing the others" trope. Also, it's good to know that hard drugs can be used as resistance against mind control. I'll have to remember that. :p Great story, Hypnothrill!

10/6/21, 2:33 PM
@Feed Your Head Well, Eduardo *thinks* that hard drugs can be used as resistance against mind control. We'll just have to wait and see whether he's right or not. ;-)
Anonymous
10/6/21, 2:02 AM
the haircut part was amazing, i hope to see more like it! how short did he cut allistair's hair?

10/6/21, 1:40 PM
I never even thought to describe it. I was thinking #2 Razor? Short but not bald. I'll need to see if I can fit that i to the next chapter somewhere.
Martin
10/5/21, 9:38 PM
Such a cute and hot story... one both feels sad and happy for Nate at the same time :)

10/6/21, 12:39 PM
It’s always an honour when you read my stories, heh. I’m glad you liked it! More is coming, and Nate’s story has some unfolding to do. @Martin
10/5/21, 11:49 AM
nice Story. hope there is more coming.

10/6/21, 9:26 AM
Hi @Jonanator, thanks for your comment - I'm gonna take a bit of a break for now, let my brain cook up some new ideas. But I'll be back when I have a new story! In the meantime, @MisterXIX and I will, at some point continue with our co-written story "The Devil by My Side"!

10/6/21, 10:45 AM
@HunkLover ok, no problem 🙂
10/2/21, 1:35 AM
Another 5 star rating in every category!!! Such a hot and tender story. I was so scared when he went into the bookstore, he would lose Charlie. I panicked when he panicked thinking the worse. And I think something is up with that bookstore. And many thanks for the shout out in your comment above.

10/6/21, 9:46 AM
I think you might be onto something there, @PupScout! Plus, you deserved the shoutout - love your stories!
9/29/21, 12:17 AM
Bravo! What a great story. I love the dog calling cock his "tail." Sweet, hot and innocent. 5 Woofs.

10/6/21, 9:44 AM
Thanks @PupScout! I'll be aiming to get more 5 Woof ratings!
Anonymous
10/5/21, 1:47 PM
What a sweet ending, and hot to boot. Kinda sad Brett had to leave though, I hope he'll find his own happiness

10/6/21, 9:35 AM
Thanks! It's hard to write an ending where everyone gets what they want, especially in such a vulnerable triangle. I didn't want to feel like I was rushing the ending, but, it felt like there was a natural conclusion to the story and Brett just wasn't it. He was a facilitator for the plot in some ways, but I think it was important that he decided to leave, himself. It's true to our reality - sometimes people come into your life for a reason, a season or a lifetime.
10/5/21, 5:31 PM
What a beautiful story! I feel sorry for Brett, but am glad that Harry and Charlie found happiness in the end.

10/6/21, 9:32 AM
Thank you @Hypnoguy67! I'll agree, there's a slight bittersweetness to the way things wrapped up. I like to think that Brett knew that all along he was really there to support Harry when he needed it, as a friend. I tried to balance their relationship as being one that was meaningful to them, but not romantic. I think Brett deciding that both he and Harry deserved more than that was the best way to craft a satisfying ending.
10/6/21, 7:15 AM
darker approach!