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9/29/21, 12:17 AM
Bravo! What a great story. I love the dog calling cock his "tail." Sweet, hot and innocent. 5 Woofs.

10/6/21, 9:44 AM
Thanks @PupScout! I'll be aiming to get more 5 Woof ratings!
Anonymous
10/5/21, 1:47 PM
What a sweet ending, and hot to boot. Kinda sad Brett had to leave though, I hope he'll find his own happiness

10/6/21, 9:35 AM
Thanks! It's hard to write an ending where everyone gets what they want, especially in such a vulnerable triangle. I didn't want to feel like I was rushing the ending, but, it felt like there was a natural conclusion to the story and Brett just wasn't it. He was a facilitator for the plot in some ways, but I think it was important that he decided to leave, himself. It's true to our reality - sometimes people come into your life for a reason, a season or a lifetime.
10/5/21, 5:31 PM
What a beautiful story! I feel sorry for Brett, but am glad that Harry and Charlie found happiness in the end.

10/6/21, 9:32 AM
Thank you @Hypnoguy67! I'll agree, there's a slight bittersweetness to the way things wrapped up. I like to think that Brett knew that all along he was really there to support Harry when he needed it, as a friend. I tried to balance their relationship as being one that was meaningful to them, but not romantic. I think Brett deciding that both he and Harry deserved more than that was the best way to craft a satisfying ending.
10/6/21, 7:15 AM
darker approach!
10/6/21, 6:40 AM
I love a little resistance in stories like this. The idea that Eddie doesn't know what the records are saying meaning he can't be hypnotized as easily is perfect.
Anonymous
10/6/21, 6:27 AM
this was both hot and very funny! i agree that the company memo format is underutilized, and you did an excellent job with it. thanks for the great read!!!
Sep 28, 2021
Anonymous
10/5/21, 11:43 PM
Cool little side story! Thought the thong touch was hot--been hoping you would add it to the Edits and Corrections story in some way actually lol. Would be amusing and hot to read about Sam getting into thongs/panties while starting to warm up to Marc 😁😆

10/6/21, 12:41 AM
Thanks! Funny you should mention that idea for Edits! Sam making it okay for straight guys to wear fun, colorful underwear has been bouncing around in the background waiting for a good opportunity to work into the story. @

10/6/21, 4:07 AM
@bluesuedewho cool, looking forward to it then!
Lock Jockey
10/6/21, 3:40 AM
Loving this story! Definitely can not wait for the next chapter. Hope we get to see Jake experience getting fucked. Keep up the good work!
JMan
10/6/21, 2:45 AM
Holy crap that was hot! I enjoyed him treating Derek as an object - I considered that part of the fantasy/magic for that "scene" he did for him. I came back to re-read it and I see the edits made, and I think that will help some of these observations others had. Me, I *thoroughly* enjoyed this.
10/5/21, 11:37 PM
Gonna be honest, I'm missing the romantic angle to this story. Is it a slow-burn?

10/6/21, 2:34 AM
@amul lots more story to come. Romance is fashionably late to some parties.