Recent Comments

10/5/21, 11:15 AM
Wicked story, loved it and especially enjoyed the rarely-used "company memo/press release" story format. Well done. As for tagging, I would recommend a somewhat more generic tag along the lines of "detachable body parts" which while uncommon, would see more use and be more widely applicable than body part teleportation while still cluing the readers in to what kind of kink they were about to see.

10/5/21, 11:19 AM
@amul thanks! ah there is a detachment tag. I assume that's what it means so I updated the tags. If it actually means something else someone let me know.
10/5/21, 12:33 AM
Great dialog with the computer. Barista is a jerk....he realizes a dog can understand what they're saying and he leaves? I'd be on my knees asking him how do I too turn into a dog? And I loved the description of scents when he was looking for the Barista after he left.

10/5/21, 10:55 AM
@PupScout I still think I'd react the same way the Barista did... it would freak me out too! Thanks for your kind words.
boi98229
10/5/21, 7:00 AM
Intriguing, but not sure quite yet what to think so far.

10/5/21, 10:54 AM
@boi98229 Well, here's hoping you like where it goes!
10/5/21, 10:52 AM
I really enjoy "improvement" transformation stories where the sub grows personally and physically without being negatively impacted (e.g.; turned into an idiot).
10/5/21, 10:37 AM
please continue
Anonymous
10/5/21, 9:48 AM
Loved the haircut element. Would have loved it to be even more descriptive and perhaps tied into some brainwashing element.
10/5/21, 9:40 AM
I just read this incredibly hot series! I like the premise of dart injected nanobots Brendan sounds so hot! ty.
10/5/21, 6:46 AM
Good stuff!
Small Fan
10/5/21, 5:57 AM
really nice. even the use of ALL CAPS helped for jumping form section to section. Good work!
10/4/21, 9:41 PM
Thanks for reading. I feel like there might be a more appropriate tag than creating "body part teleportation", but I'm not sure what it is. If anyone has a suggestion, please let me know.

Martin
10/5/21, 5:51 AM
@Dreamweavr That tag is too specific. I removed it, but if anyone can come up with a better tag, go ahead and add it.