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10/5/21, 12:33 AM
Great dialog with the computer. Barista is a jerk....he realizes a dog can understand what they're saying and he leaves? I'd be on my knees asking him how do I too turn into a dog? And I loved the description of scents when he was looking for the Barista after he left.

10/5/21, 10:55 AM
@PupScout I still think I'd react the same way the Barista did... it would freak me out too! Thanks for your kind words.
boi98229
10/5/21, 7:00 AM
Intriguing, but not sure quite yet what to think so far.

10/5/21, 10:54 AM
@boi98229 Well, here's hoping you like where it goes!
10/5/21, 10:52 AM
I really enjoy "improvement" transformation stories where the sub grows personally and physically without being negatively impacted (e.g.; turned into an idiot).
10/5/21, 10:37 AM
please continue
Anonymous
10/5/21, 9:48 AM
Loved the haircut element. Would have loved it to be even more descriptive and perhaps tied into some brainwashing element.
10/5/21, 9:40 AM
I just read this incredibly hot series! I like the premise of dart injected nanobots Brendan sounds so hot! ty.
10/5/21, 6:46 AM
Good stuff!
Small Fan
10/5/21, 5:57 AM
really nice. even the use of ALL CAPS helped for jumping form section to section. Good work!
10/4/21, 9:41 PM
Thanks for reading. I feel like there might be a more appropriate tag than creating "body part teleportation", but I'm not sure what it is. If anyone has a suggestion, please let me know.

Martin
10/5/21, 5:51 AM
@Dreamweavr That tag is too specific. I removed it, but if anyone can come up with a better tag, go ahead and add it.
10/5/21, 5:34 AM
I'd say stay gentle in demeanor but darker in the sense of more manipulative (making him doubt his perception of reality and believe George is a better source of reason than him) could be interesting