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10/5/21, 12:50 AM
I've been saving my next jo sesh for the third installment! This is so hot I don't want, I NEED more!
10/4/21, 11:56 PM
Welcome! Nice story. Those lycra unitards are hot. Always did have a thing for one-piece lycra outfits. I appreciated that you went light on the description of your characters. It's a good technique that allows your readers to imagine the characters as they prefer. Just lovingly describing his muscular ass and big dick was plenty fine.
10/4/21, 11:45 PM
i like both. i vote to stay gentle for now, but get darker
10/4/21, 11:23 PM
I was slightly disturbed but I felt there was plenty of set-up at the beginning to establish that Razz and Derek were in love and that Derek was pretty cognizant about how his partner's magic works. He wasn't worried, so I wasn't very worried. I did feel a bit of anxiety at the false perception of time - two months, and thought that maybe the "solution" to the problem with the shit job was that Razz kept him like that for long enough that he'd be fired from the job, but I was not at all surprised when that was revealed to simply be false, part of the fantasy. Great story and expertly written.

10/4/21, 11:30 PM
@amul thanks for the feedback! glad it worked for you. and yes, Derek being so willing was the main way I hoped to convey that everything was safe despite seeming dangerous/scary. that's why I was kinda worried to lose his perspective for the middle because the 3rd person neutral narration is much harsher sounding. thanks again for the comment, i really appreciate it!
10/4/21, 10:47 PM
next part?
10/4/21, 9:29 PM
This was great, but why is it labeled as two chapters?

Yourguy92
10/4/21, 9:33 PM
Because they used to be two. But I couldn't upload them separately due to the minimum characters of this platform. @absman420
10/4/21, 9:27 PM
i wonder if slave has some sexy brothers so that way Cory can hang out with the whole family and make them his own family?
Anonymous
10/4/21, 8:18 PM
Wow what a story! We need more like this one!!
10/4/21, 8:07 PM
i guess it depends on what you mean by "dark", really. Forced age regression is automatically a dark subject matter, so we've already arrived at "dark" imo. That being said, a Daddy-hypnotist who is violent, aggressive or rapey rather ruins the mood for me. Just speaking personally.