The scenes with Yousef and Mo are just… SEARINGLY hot. Amazing stuff. Can’t get enough of them together and figuring out their new dynamic. They’ll be in for a wild family get-together some point in the future haha. I think one of the things that really draws me to them is that idea of reconnection and love being birthed between two people, two men, related or not, all because of Luna. To me, it’s beautiful and the way you depict it feels so lovely—and hot. Can’t wait to read more!

Would love to see the series continued!

I love this hot story!

I want to see more of John having to obey even though he knows.

Loved this story! The growth sequences were super vivid and the concept was a winner. Definitely saving it for the wank bank 😉

I’m really in a mood to review today it seems, having decided to read through your unfinished stories again. I find this series to be very intriguing and conflicting compared to your other stories, as on one hand it ticks a lot of my interests, but on the other hand the toxic masculinity and misogyny of the imperial empire is somewhat off-putting, which definitely adds complexity to the story, especially with the more conversion like corruption compared to your other stories. It makes more of a villian out of the antagonist than has occured in your other stories which, again, adds to the complexity of the story, as while my kinky mind wants the Major, his sons and his men to be converted to the imperial empire, my more rational mind is going, oh, these very much are not the good guys, not even sorta-bad guys, but full on treating half their entire population as completely subservient to the other half not good. It's an interesting conudrum to be in hah. But on to less complex thoughts, imaging ways in which this story could continue. Having re-read the ending, part of me hopes for Pavel's men to be inducted into the imperial empire, only to end up converting his sons for him as they realise their leader won't be truly part of the empire until his sons are too. Or having a situation where Pavel and Henry grow closer while Pavel keeps bringing the boys to the club and Anton keeps leaving when they go to have sex until he gets jealous of their closeness and joins them, leading to a situation where there isn't enough women for all three of them so Pavel encourages them to all just share the two women between the three of them at them same time. Or taking the situation with Fynn (having his girlfriend cheating on him) and replicating it with Anton, by having one of the imperial men seduce Anton's girlfriend and have him find her cheating on him ('for his own good') and then having the way clear for Pavel and Henry to comfort him and enjoy himself at the club with his father and brother, leading to Pavel slowly converting his sons to the imperial empire while directly converting his men one by one at the same time, treating his sons more like 'brothers' as time goes on, until his subconcious resistance crumbles when he realises he's corrupted his sons mentality so far towards the imperial empire that the only thing left to do is make their bodies 'imperial' as well himself so that they'll at least all be imperial men together. edit: holy shit did not realise how much I wrote until I posted this, sorry for the block of text lol

This is RIGHT up my alley!

This was really good as is. While it's a pity there won't be a sequel, I'm glad to see a new work by you again. I would probably fall into that temptation as well. It's just too good. My only quirk about this story was the machine arms near the end. Maybe it was to illustrate that he was being treated as a you. Yet the guy could have just kept him in those mitts for the same outcome. Its not like toys need hands.

Great story! Loved the details around the slow transference of role and gear. Would love to see the next chapter the dom tagging Mark with his own gear, like a property tag. Definitely more gear play!!!

fucking hot, nice story, please more, more seducing, filming, and cashrape him too and expose him