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Guest
10/4/21, 3:43 PM
I vote for the darker approach!
10/4/21, 3:39 PM
I vote for the darker approach!
10/4/21, 2:25 PM
loved the ending! super excited for more chapters :)
10/4/21, 2:01 PM
I vote for the gentle aproach
10/4/21, 1:39 PM
The writing style is a little strange for me, but I enjoyed it. A bit dark, no friends? Definitely intrigued.
10/4/21, 1:27 PM
Another great chapter! And a vote! Definitely a tough choice, but if i had to choose, I vote gentle. I think it keeps better with the tone of these first chapters. And, selfishly, gentle might mean slower, so, more chapters.
10/4/21, 12:30 PM
"Back to before" WOW! This series is so well written. It draws me in, just like the flame on those un-birthday candles. Best mental regression story in a bazillion years.

10/4/21, 12:42 PM
Aww shucks @babiedboi, that's very kind of you to say.
10/4/21, 10:56 AM
Good story with a nice twist at the end.
CHS2607
10/4/21, 10:42 AM
loving how creative each of these chapters are ;)
jack
10/4/21, 3:15 AM
wow! this is just fantastic. thank you!

10/4/21, 7:04 AM
@jack That means a lot to me. Thank you for reading the story so far!