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10/2/21, 2:59 PM
hottttt
Jack
10/2/21, 2:37 PM
I'm really intrigued by this story. There's so many things that *could* happen. After all, he was just imagining Marcello's reaction. I don't know if just one response is enough for you, but I'd love to see more of this!
Anonymous
10/2/21, 11:19 AM
Incredible
Ian Away
10/2/21, 10:51 AM
Hello One Ring, are you still active? I've been trying to find your old stories on sites but no luck apart from this one.
Crabadan
10/2/21, 8:59 AM
So fucking sexy. And I want to know Finn better. He seems to be a cool personality (at least I hope).
Daniel
10/2/21, 8:24 AM
yeppers bud, the 'taking' of Juan's will was hot...corruption is sooo sexy ! more please I.J.S.
Daniel
10/2/21, 8:08 AM
dude you are a great storyteller - hot as ever. I'm all about corruption of innocence, resistance then giving in. did you ever finish the airline pilot story ? keep it kinky bro ( the pix are great man ) I.J.S.
10/2/21, 5:19 AM
Absolutely do a sequel! It would add some edge maybe to add some variety to the ways the guys react as well as the coach.
10/2/21, 4:44 AM
Great idea, I have got to find me some of those cards
Anonymous
10/2/21, 3:50 AM
This is one of my favourite stories ever!