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9/29/21, 11:34 PM
Hmmm, as they get closer to each other and share intimacy, I'm beginning to wonder if the same power that turned Charlie from dog to man or vice versa, could start to work its magic on the narrator. This is a delightful story and very well written character-wise.

9/30/21, 10:03 AM
Hmmm, @PupScout... you certainly raise an interesting idea.. but I won't spoil the story for you by giving away any spoilers. Thank you so much for your kind words - I've really enjoyed writing it!
8/6/20, 1:33 AM
Hi folks, there will likely be a follow-up at some point - though I couldn't say when, as I have much less time for writing these days. Thanks for your interest in the series!

9/30/21, 8:39 AM
@Micah Maars great story! would love a follow-up!
9/30/21, 8:34 AM
real hot and real interesting as an exploration to gender identities. love this!!
spiralthiago
9/27/21, 7:38 PM
POR FAVOR DEJALOS TOMARLO Y VERÁS QUE BIEN LO DISFRUTARÁS COMO LO DISFRUTASTE HACE MUCHO TIEMPO SER UN HERMANO COMO TODOS AQUÍ Y ÚNETE A ELLOS TENDRÁS UN GRAN " THIAGO " QUE ME DIJO , SERÁS UN GRANMUSCULAR RUBIO COMO TUS HERMANOS PORNO. ÚNETE Y VERÁS QUE YO, TU JEFE , MICHAEL TE HARÉ FELIZ Y TEHARÉ GANAR MUCHO DINERO. ADQUISICIÓN YOU WILL BE A GREAT ACQUISITION HERE AND YOU WILL LIKE IT..JUST FEEL AND LET TAKE YOURSELF ONCE YOU HAVE THIS GOOD .. PROCEED TO SAY MY WORDS AND GIVE YOU TO TAKE THIS (I SACK A STRANGE WHITE DRINK AND WITH HORRIBLE SMELL) .. JUST LET YOU TAKE "THIAGO" ... I replied half drunk with feelings NO! NO ! I'M NOT GAY AND I WILL NEVER BE A BLONDE AND DUMB MUSCLE LIKE THEM ... I DON'T CARE THAT THEY SEE ME LIKE THAT IN THE STREET. I WANT MY FRIENDS BACK PLEASE ... I did not realize it and I had advanced a bit far from the exit and I stayed still there ... en eso escucho una voz detrás de JHONY y ANDY quienes dijeron que sería hermoso y cubrieron la salida .. ENTRAR ! Escuché .. decir que soy un HERMANO Y MI NOMBRE ES " THIAGO " O DANDY que será mejor para ti .. vamos !! ain que me veo rodeado de MUSCULOS RUBIOS HERMANOS QUEDIJE HERMANOS !!!! NO NO NO !!!! NO QUIERO SER RUBIO HERMANO NO NO NO .... en eso veo como todos se flexionan y comienzan a tocarse ... ESAS BOMBILLAS GRANDES ESOS MÚSCULOS ENORMES ESOS HERMOSOS OJOS AZULES ESOS ROPA ROPA , ESAS BOTAS NIKE, ESAS ESOS MMM .. UFFFF NOOOOOOO .. ESPERAN POR FAVOR SUFICIENTE NOOOOO ...... MMMMM QUE ES CALIENTE EN QUE VEO QUE ESTAN MAS CERCA Y SE QUITAN TODAS LAS CAMISETAS DE LYCRA SEXYS QUE ERA Y SON MAS BONITAS MAS BONITAS ... MMMM QUE BUENO SERIA PARA KISS AND alabanza de los PECTORALES LOS BICEX ..... mmmmmm uffffff EN que siento mis pezones llegaron DURO ... Y ufffff AGAIN THAT CHILLS AND THAT SENSATION STOOLED.I STARTED TO LEAVE SLIME FROM MY MOUTH AND TO STAY LONGER I DIDN'T WANT TO RUN AWAY .. BUT I WANTED TO SCREAM .. I AM NOT ... THAT WAS WHAT I WANTED TO SAY ... THOSE BODIES LOOK PRETTY I WOULD LIKE TO BE LIKE THEM AND ENJOY.NO NO NO NO PLEASE PLEASE NOOOO I'M NOT GAY PLEASE I DON'T WANT TO BE A MUSCULAR BLONDE BROTHER NO PLEASE SCREAM LOUD BUT MY BODY WAS BETRAYING ME ...... I WANTED TO FEEL I WANTED TO TRY I WANTED TO KNOW WHAT IT FEELS TO BE THAT WAY AND ENJOY ENJOYING ...UFFF UFFFF UFFFF (AND HERE MY LAST RESISTANCES) ... NO NO PLEASE WOW.. I'M THIRSTY YELL..MICHAEL THE BOSS TOLD ME HERE YOU HAVE YOUR DRINK YOU JUST HAVE TO SAY YOU WANT TO BE A MUSCULAR BLONDE BROTHER AND IT WILL BE YOURS IT WILL CALM THAT THIRST YOU HAVE NO PLEASE .... AND ALMOST COULDN'T TALK ABOUT THE DRIED MOUTH THAT I HAD ... IN THAT I LISTEN AGAIN TO THE BOSS MICHAEL SAY SAY IT VAMPS SAY IT AND IT WILL PASS YOUR THIRST AND I JUST HAD TO SAY I WANT TO BE A MUSCULAR BLONDE BROTHER AND ENJOY, ENJOY AS YOU WANT IT I SAID IT SOFT THEN THE BOSS APPROACHED AND GAVE ME A SIP TO CALM MY THIRST AND SAID SAY IT STRONGER, DO NOT LISTEN TO YOU "I WANT TO BE A MUSCULAR BLOND BROTHER AND ENJOY ENJOYING AS YOU WANT IT BOSS" and sedi to all this new world that they were giving me ... THE BOSS APPROACHED AND SAID "BE A BLUE-EYED GREEK MUSCLE WITH A UK GREAT PHYSICAL LIKE THE ONE YOU WANT AND THAT YOUR BODY ONLY SHOWS AND DYOU WANT PLEASURE "YOUR CLOTHES WILL BE TIGHTEN WELL SEXY AND GAY TO DEMOST SEX IRRADIATE SEX THAT IS WHAT YOU WILL BE NOW A MUSCULAR BLOND BROTHER DOLL SEXUAL AND GAY PORN ACTOR THAT YOU WANTED SO MUCH .... NOW DRINK YOUR NECTAR AND BE "THIAGO DANDY" DANDY FOR EVERYONE .... I HAVE MY DRINK AND I FEEL MORE RELIEFED MORE RELAXED MORE CALM AND WITH BARGAIN TO MAKE GYMNASIA GROW AND GROW MORE IN ADDITION TO THE SAME SEXUAL HEAT THAT I STARTED TO HAVE AND I REMEMBERED IN THE CLOTHING OF HOW GOOD IT FEELED TO BE PENETRATED AND SUCCESSED .... I GAVE UP TO PLEASURE AND JUST SAID DOUBT AND SMILED LIKE ALL THE MUSCLE FOOLS I HATED .. BUT I HAVE TO ADMIT NOW THEY ARE BEAUTIFUL SEXY MUSCULAR BLONDE BROTHERS ... HOW I WANT TO BE ME FUI A UN BANCO DE ABDOMINALES , Y ME QUITO LA ROPA , ME PONGO CUATRO , ABRE MIS PIERNAS Y NO ESTOY PARA SENTIR LA POLLA MAS RICA DE MI HERMANO JHONY , GEMI Y YO PIDIÓ MÁS TIEMPO TENÍA DANNY Y MIS HERMANOS EDDY Y TEDY .. CHUPAN COMO NUNCA ESAS POLLAS .. PEDIA MAS ME SIENTO DOS ATRAS NO ME IMPORTABA QUIENES ERA Y YO TENIA DOS EN MI BOCA Y CUATRO EN MIS MANOS ME SIENTO FELIZ ME SIENTO BIEN .. YO ERA GAY Y DISFRUTARÍA SER GAY ES SEXO ES DISFRUTAR ES DISFRUTAR UFFF SI ME ENCANTA SER GAY Y SER OTRO HERMANO ... AUNQUE NO SOY AÚN MUSCULAR O RUBIO BUT I ENJOYED IT WHEN I FEEL THE HEAT ALL OVER MY BODY IT WAS THAT I WAS COMPLETELY FINISHED ALL OVER MY BODY, FACE, MOUTH AND TAIL ... THAT'S WHAT I FINISHED AND I STARTED FEELING WEIRD I STARTED TO FEEL A GREAT BURNING THROUGHOUT MY BODY AND I BEGAN TO GET Dizzy I FEELED ME GROWING AND GROWING AND SMILING AT ME LIKE THE FOOL THAT I WAS ONLY SERVED TO BE SEXUAL AND I WOULD ENJOY IT ... YES YES YES YES .MORE AND BETTER I grew up and grew up in a moment I fainted I woke up bathed and cleaned with a new clothes ... A WELL-FIT LYCRA SWEATSHIRT WITH THE GYMNASIO LOGO A RAINBOW AND THE WORD I AM HAPPY A GOLDEN CYCLING PANTS THAT MARKED MY BIG BULK AND GOLDEN NIKE BOOTS WITH THE SILVER LOGO TO MATCH ... I FEEL HAPPY WITH MY WHITE SMILE AND MY SQUARE MALE FACE WITHOUT NO BEAUTIFUL IN THE BODY OR THE FACE MY CUT TO RAISE WELL MILITARY AND MY BUTT WELL HUGE .... I WAS HAPPY I WAS PLEASED TO BE A MUSCULAR BROTHER ... I FEELED PART OF MY MUSCULAR FAMILY IN THAT I LISTEN DANDY IT'S TIME TO FILM .. I TURNED THROUGH AND WENT HAPPY TO MAKE MY FIRST GAY PORN .. IN THAT I STROPPED WITH SOME NERD CLOTHES AND I LAUGHED ... I WAS A HAPPY MUSCULAR BROTHER ... IN TEN MINUTES WHEN I WENT TO THE FILM, MY EYES TURNED BLUE AND MY HAIR BLOND "I WAS HAPPY" BEST SAID THIAGO DANDY WAS HAPPY .. NOW DANDY WILL BE A GREAT PORN STAR AND A GREAT MUSCULAR BLONDE BROTHER AS I ALWAYS DREAM ... THANK YOU BOSS THANK YOU I KNEEL AND SUCK HIM HIS COCK LIKE THE BEAUTIFUL MUSCULAR BLONDE BROTHER WHO ONLY SERVED TO PROVE THAT PLEASURE AND MUSCLES GO TOGETHER the end..

9/27/21, 7:43 PM
@spiralthiago I've had so much fun watching you write this in small installments over the course of the day. I haven't counted, but I think it's a lot longer than the original story. I hope you come back to this story, clean it up a bit, and then post it separately as your sequel to "Envying Edward."

spiralthiago
9/30/21, 8:28 AM
@ Thank you if I will polish it better and I am glad that you liked it. It is my first story .. you are my inspiration, thank you ..Hypnothrill

spiralthiago
9/30/21, 8:31 AM
stories thank you very much@ I did not know how to write and I made many deliveries until I saw that I could write longer .. but well, that's how it starts, doesn't it? .. thanks for being my motivation .. my head is spinning full with several Hypnothrill
9/30/21, 7:29 AM
Ooh boy I'm excited to see how this story develops! Only 4-5 parts? 😢
Ben
9/30/21, 6:35 AM
Love this chapter!!!! ;)
9/30/21, 6:28 AM
I adore anything musk related. So favourited for sure =3
screamingmoist
9/30/21, 4:52 AM
appreciate the feedback!
mikegay4u
9/30/21, 4:33 AM
This story grabs you right away. I already want more.
9/30/21, 2:59 AM
Simply a really amazing story! Glad that you are back! I just found out this amazing series that you are writing and I am really into it. Big and manly guys being treated as bulls and being constantly milked is very hot! I loved when they are strapped down to be milked like good bulls they are! Cannot wait to see the future chapters! Keep going with the amazing work!