Recent Comments

Anonymous
9/28/21, 1:27 PM
I kind of hope for an ending where the world is put back to normal. Maybe thanks to the black suits or the shawled ladies, but somehow Sam and Gabe lose control of the book and the world goes back to how it was before they got their hands on it. But thanks to their own edits to safeguard them, the changes made to them cannot be reverted. So while the world returns to normal, Sam and Gabe (and maybe Marc?) remain these sex-beasts and of course no one finds it unusual in the least. Only the boys remember something is off, but are helpless to fix it. I dunno, I both wish and don't wish for an ending like that.
9/28/21, 1:47 AM
What....Oh man you got me on my seat here. I need more.

9/28/21, 11:47 AM
@Jonanator Stay tuned! More is on the way!

9/28/21, 11:51 AM
@HunkLover Yeah, can't wait. Finally found out why he's a dog, just leaving me on the edge of my seat. you really know how to get an audience
Buckyboi
9/28/21, 4:44 AM
OK, so ... Charlie used to be a human who got cursed by this lady? He is a lot nicer and happier as Charlie. He's immortal?! It sounds like he can die (and just did) but the curse just brings him back to keep him suffering. Decades?! Eternal?! How old is he?! Sounds like he got sent back in time too or something. Getting real Beauty and the Best vibes now. The laptop was a brilliant idea, and a funny scene, that would freak me out too...

9/28/21, 11:49 AM
Well @Buckyboi, I won't give anything away, but you're getting closer to the target! Hope you like where we're going.
9/27/21, 1:43 AM
Really enjoying this story! I love that you "threw us a bone" as to Charlie's backstory and a hint to the cause of his doggy transformation. Looking forward to find out more about Charlie and what happens to Brett in the next chapter.

9/28/21, 11:47 AM
Thanks @Hypnoguy67! I'm loving the amount of positivity that everyone seems to be lavishing on this story! I really appreciate it so, so much. Don't worry all will be revealed, I promise!
Anonymous
9/26/21, 10:44 PM
Ooo, some backstory to Charlie! Looks like he has some karmic bills to pay. Im really enjoying this story.

9/28/21, 11:46 AM
Well you can't go around threatening people forever without expecting that one day you'll meet someone whose bite is worse than their bark.
nycboot
9/26/21, 10:32 PM
Not sure where you're going, but I'm in for the ride.

9/28/21, 11:44 AM
Oh, don't worry, @nycboot ! I'll happily take the lead.
Anonymous
9/28/21, 10:22 AM
This is off to a really good start, I honestly can't wait to see what happens next and how the story concludes! 💦💦💦
9/28/21, 9:53 AM
Don't you just love season finales that tie up every loose end but still prepare you for a sequel? sad to see the series end,but it had to be at some point but NOW I'm quite excited to see what comes next
Anonymous
9/28/21, 8:28 AM
thats hot!!!
9/28/21, 7:39 AM
Fantastic start, love the kissing, affection, and learning to show off their bulges and bums in tight speedos, basically everything. Can't wait to see what's next.