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2/27/25, 2:29 AM
John's shaping Zak to be a horny 'straight' slut, it would be so hot if the changes get so out of hand that he takes control of John
2/27/25, 1:41 AM
I have much the same feeling as DBar. Hopefully someone Masterful will note what's going on and stop the torture.
Anonymous
2/26/25, 9:46 PM
You are so detailed! I am happy to see more long form slow burns here. I look forward to seeing where this all goes.

2/27/25, 12:19 AM
@Anonymous It gets spicy quick...just have to get all of the prestuff done!
2/26/25, 11:41 PM
So far this has been fantastic! When does Alex realize the dynamic between him and Ethan gives him a lot of power too! It is his submission… the ability to relax and enjoy the ride that provides Ethan his thrill of dominating Alex?
2/26/25, 10:37 PM
This is absolutely amazing! Congrats on a hot as fu k story
Feb 25, 2025
2/25/25, 5:14 AM
What a great idea, and I love the depiction of them struggling to figure out how to work it. Very curious to see where it goes next, this feels ripe with possibility, far beyond simply masturbating with three brains in one body.

2/25/25, 10:39 PM
@[Massaurin](/user/show/10005276) I’d love to hear ideas if you have any

2/26/25, 10:23 PM
@[mustache](/user/show/10042040) Well, I hope that at some point, this fusion of Aiden, Jason, and Grant will find out their combined (either latent, or by virtue of their new manliness imparted by their fusion) homosexuality. I don't know how you would get this new man into an environment leading to them having sex, but I'm interested to see their (hopefully different!) reactions if that is in line with what things you have in mind. Also, based on my parsing of your description of them post transformation, I definitely think they could do with some further weight gain, a bigger mustache. Maybe even progress to a full horseshoe, their general appearance aging up, even shifting from cigarettes to a more 'manly' method of smoking like a pipe or cigars. I'm not sure if you're intending on having them remain three fully distinct entities in their mind, but as long as they are separate, I think I personally would love something like Grant, as he picks up their nicotine addiction, wants to try other methods because he doesn't think cigarettes are "big" enough or something, and takes them to a pipe/cigar shop, and they deepen their transformed traits as they try pipes. They eventually return, and in the process get sucked into the events which awaken their attraction to men? I like writing, but have way, way, way more ideas than I can ever hope to write because I just spawn them, so I'm always happy to chat :) Love your work!
2/26/25, 7:00 PM
A lovely start! I'm looking forward to where this adventure goes,...

2/26/25, 8:42 PM
@[Blazargus](/user/show/10012784) Thanks. I hope some more give it a chance…

2/26/25, 9:20 PM
@[thejazzcat](/user/show/10005285) It's a huge first chapter, so give people a chance to get stuck in ;) I know I had to bookmark and come back! Ha ha! But I'm definitely excited to see how these characters develop :D

2/26/25, 9:30 PM
@[Blazargus](/user/show/10012784) Thanks. You are always awesome.
2/26/25, 12:59 PM
Fantastic- question: is Ronald (the name Cyrus called the muscle guy) Ryan?

2/26/25, 8:55 PM
@[BillionaireSociety](/user/show/925917) Ronald is the bar owner, Max's Boss. Ryan is the Jock member of The Thimble Club. To awnser your question Max knows Ronald closer than he does Ryan, so making him doubt himself was easier for Cyrus to target his Boss. And if you are wondering how he knows if Cyrus was never really there...Well keep reading :)
2/26/25, 8:16 PM
Beautiful. There is something about the way you explore the gravitas of each action: the kneeling, the thank you, the smelling, that other authors might just write off in a “matter of fact” way. Certainly looking forward to the next chapter.
2/26/25, 7:15 PM
I love the well-utilized Stranger in a Strange Land reference. One of my favorite books.