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9/27/21, 1:43 AM
Really enjoying this story! I love that you "threw us a bone" as to Charlie's backstory and a hint to the cause of his doggy transformation. Looking forward to find out more about Charlie and what happens to Brett in the next chapter.

9/28/21, 11:47 AM
Thanks @Hypnoguy67! I'm loving the amount of positivity that everyone seems to be lavishing on this story! I really appreciate it so, so much. Don't worry all will be revealed, I promise!
Anonymous
9/26/21, 10:44 PM
Ooo, some backstory to Charlie! Looks like he has some karmic bills to pay. Im really enjoying this story.

9/28/21, 11:46 AM
Well you can't go around threatening people forever without expecting that one day you'll meet someone whose bite is worse than their bark.
nycboot
9/26/21, 10:32 PM
Not sure where you're going, but I'm in for the ride.

9/28/21, 11:44 AM
Oh, don't worry, @nycboot ! I'll happily take the lead.
Anonymous
9/28/21, 10:22 AM
This is off to a really good start, I honestly can't wait to see what happens next and how the story concludes! 💦💦💦
9/28/21, 9:53 AM
Don't you just love season finales that tie up every loose end but still prepare you for a sequel? sad to see the series end,but it had to be at some point but NOW I'm quite excited to see what comes next
Anonymous
9/28/21, 8:28 AM
thats hot!!!
9/28/21, 7:39 AM
Fantastic start, love the kissing, affection, and learning to show off their bulges and bums in tight speedos, basically everything. Can't wait to see what's next.
9/28/21, 7:09 AM
Thank you for your effort. I truly enjoyed the series v much. I look forward to your future works...
9/28/21, 7:00 AM
Awesome story! Definitely continue writing stories
boi98229
9/28/21, 7:00 AM
What an incredible mind-bending experience it would be to take a ride in that VR box!! i would love to try something like that!! Thanks so much for your imagination, your writing skills, and your willingness to share them with us. I did once take a real ride in one of the Las Vegas casinos (the Luxor?) which consisted of a fairly small room with a 180 degree wrap-around movie screen, high quality surround sound, and about 24 seats mounted on a floor equipped with hydraulics that could tip the floor in various directions. The action movie involved flying through a series of tunnels and caverns in a chase scene. The floor tipped in sync with the changing direction, speed, and trajectory of the machine we were flying in. The experience all combined was enough to make me a little dizzy and queasy, enough that i had to turn around in my seat at one point to orient myself with the stationary and real exit sign at the back of the theater. The VR box in this story would have been even more disorienting. Being suspended in a flexible manner might serve to create the illusion that one is moving in space in response to the images, sounds and actions of the men being presented via the VR. With the drugs to muddy the mind and stimulate all of one's pleasure centers -- body and mind, the drugged dildo to titillate the sense of touch and taste on the lips, and finally the dildo to penetrate the new slut's boy pussy all add inexorably to the sensory/psychological experience. The hypnotic trance would have added to the reality of the physical experience and the unreal ease of the decisions to activate the two dildos. Making the dildos' activations the decision of the trainee was a brilliant stroke of genius to solidify the training by making the trainee responsible for accepting his own new reality. For me, the exotic nature of the location and the people would add to the excitement and confusion. Jon's additional surprise and confusion over the betrayal of his uncle and his handsome Arab cousins, and his feelings of isolation and helplessness due to the travel ban from Islamic countries preventing him from returning home to the U.S. might all tip the psychological scales of the training session against Jon. All-in-all for me this story for its short length had a lot of powerful psychological elements and was sizzlingly erotic.