thats hot!!!

Fantastic start, love the kissing, affection, and learning to show off their bulges and bums in tight speedos, basically everything. Can't wait to see what's next.

Thank you for your effort. I truly enjoyed the series v much. I look forward to your future works...

Awesome story! Definitely continue writing stories

What an incredible mind-bending experience it would be to take a ride in that VR box!! i would love to try something like that!! Thanks so much for your imagination, your writing skills, and your willingness to share them with us. I did once take a real ride in one of the Las Vegas casinos (the Luxor?) which consisted of a fairly small room with a 180 degree wrap-around movie screen, high quality surround sound, and about 24 seats mounted on a floor equipped with hydraulics that could tip the floor in various directions. The action movie involved flying through a series of tunnels and caverns in a chase scene. The floor tipped in sync with the changing direction, speed, and trajectory of the machine we were flying in. The experience all combined was enough to make me a little dizzy and queasy, enough that i had to turn around in my seat at one point to orient myself with the stationary and real exit sign at the back of the theater. The VR box in this story would have been even more disorienting. Being suspended in a flexible manner might serve to create the illusion that one is moving in space in response to the images, sounds and actions of the men being presented via the VR. With the drugs to muddy the mind and stimulate all of one's pleasure centers -- body and mind, the drugged dildo to titillate the sense of touch and taste on the lips, and finally the dildo to penetrate the new slut's boy pussy all add inexorably to the sensory/psychological experience. The hypnotic trance would have added to the reality of the physical experience and the unreal ease of the decisions to activate the two dildos. Making the dildos' activations the decision of the trainee was a brilliant stroke of genius to solidify the training by making the trainee responsible for accepting his own new reality. For me, the exotic nature of the location and the people would add to the excitement and confusion. Jon's additional surprise and confusion over the betrayal of his uncle and his handsome Arab cousins, and his feelings of isolation and helplessness due to the travel ban from Islamic countries preventing him from returning home to the U.S. might all tip the psychological scales of the training session against Jon. All-in-all for me this story for its short length had a lot of powerful psychological elements and was sizzlingly erotic.

Loved this chapter too!! Heh~ Definitely my go to story as of now~~ 🔥 🔥 🔥

Hey, glad to see the story is still going strong. Allow me to say as a person who has legit WIRED nipples and also gets super turned on by playing with guys similar to myself, that tutoring scene was amazing! Feel free to keep it coming though at this point writing Sam's sex scenes might be getting more a more like juggling with all of his erogenous zones lol Predictions: 1. Given the recent texts from TylerXXL, I would guess that he's still a student. Previously had the book but maybe a roommate donated it back to the campus bookstore without asking. Per previous edit he can't know about the textbook, BUT, he does apparently still have a "monster cock" that everyone wants to ride and heard Gabe, and possibly now Danny, raving about how good Sam is at sex and wants a go himself. 2. I predict given Danny's newly "obsessed" status with Sam's nipples, we'll be seeing more of him, and hopefully some more nip action. I also anticipate that since he and Tyler don't really have a reason to consider Sam's feelings like Marc and Gabe, they'll be working much harder to legit top him. Maybe a certain superhero will need to come to the rescue? 3. Speaking of, with the latest edits, I came up with an idea of Marc's Kryptonite... being topped himself. When presented with a dick larger than his, or a bigger alpha attitude, he turns into a helpless bitch in heat, maybe even to the point of some S&M mind control play. Story implications could be Tyler using this against Marc who will automatically want to ride his dick and therefore become powerless (or a power bottom) and Sam, having "the perfect tool for the job" will be the only one who can break Marc out of Tyler's trance... only for Marc to fuck himself silly on Sam of course ;) I could even picture them having to figure out how they need to fuck each other simultaneously to get around Marc's weakness (possible given how Sam now also has a magic dick) and to satisfy Sam's urges. 4. Given the athleticism equating to sexual activity, I predict all the guys on campus are suddenly going to be MUCH more muscular/athletic which seems to really do it for Sam. In particular, I foresee now upper class men Teddy and Freddy completing there change from freshman twinks to hung studs who continue to proposition Sam in a fun/casual sort of way, possibly making him even more distracted and prone to rushed edits. 5. Still struggling a bit with the suits but given the scene at the comic store I can at least feel confident saying they are NOT a result of an edit and instead can be attributed to the greater powers at work along with the female staff (on the opposing side obviously). I will say I think I would have enjoyed reading the last 2 chapters together as it was originally drafted since the first one by itself felt unfinished compared to the previous chapters, but that's just my 2 cents. Again, keep up the awesome work!

Glad your back. Amazing finish and now that this story is done maybe we can see the next season of The Chip. :)

you have to continue this

will you do another chapter