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Sparky
9/27/21, 1:24 AM
Hey, glad to see the story is still going strong. Allow me to say as a person who has legit WIRED nipples and also gets super turned on by playing with guys similar to myself, that tutoring scene was amazing! Feel free to keep it coming though at this point writing Sam's sex scenes might be getting more a more like juggling with all of his erogenous zones lol Predictions: 1. Given the recent texts from TylerXXL, I would guess that he's still a student. Previously had the book but maybe a roommate donated it back to the campus bookstore without asking. Per previous edit he can't know about the textbook, BUT, he does apparently still have a "monster cock" that everyone wants to ride and heard Gabe, and possibly now Danny, raving about how good Sam is at sex and wants a go himself. 2. I predict given Danny's newly "obsessed" status with Sam's nipples, we'll be seeing more of him, and hopefully some more nip action. I also anticipate that since he and Tyler don't really have a reason to consider Sam's feelings like Marc and Gabe, they'll be working much harder to legit top him. Maybe a certain superhero will need to come to the rescue? 3. Speaking of, with the latest edits, I came up with an idea of Marc's Kryptonite... being topped himself. When presented with a dick larger than his, or a bigger alpha attitude, he turns into a helpless bitch in heat, maybe even to the point of some S&M mind control play. Story implications could be Tyler using this against Marc who will automatically want to ride his dick and therefore become powerless (or a power bottom) and Sam, having "the perfect tool for the job" will be the only one who can break Marc out of Tyler's trance... only for Marc to fuck himself silly on Sam of course ;) I could even picture them having to figure out how they need to fuck each other simultaneously to get around Marc's weakness (possible given how Sam now also has a magic dick) and to satisfy Sam's urges. 4. Given the athleticism equating to sexual activity, I predict all the guys on campus are suddenly going to be MUCH more muscular/athletic which seems to really do it for Sam. In particular, I foresee now upper class men Teddy and Freddy completing there change from freshman twinks to hung studs who continue to proposition Sam in a fun/casual sort of way, possibly making him even more distracted and prone to rushed edits. 5. Still struggling a bit with the suits but given the scene at the comic store I can at least feel confident saying they are NOT a result of an edit and instead can be attributed to the greater powers at work along with the female staff (on the opposing side obviously). I will say I think I would have enjoyed reading the last 2 chapters together as it was originally drafted since the first one by itself felt unfinished compared to the previous chapters, but that's just my 2 cents. Again, keep up the awesome work!

9/27/21, 1:48 AM
To quote my favorite movie *Clue*, "Who are you? Perry Mason?" Glad you're enjoying the story! You nailed a bunch of predictions again -- I won't spoil which ones! > I will say I think I would have enjoyed reading the last 2 chapters together as it was originally drafted since the first one by itself felt unfinished compared to the previous chapters, but that’s just my 2 cents. Thanks for the feedback on this! I thought it might be a good idea to let some plot stuff sink in before a bunch of sex, but if I ever compile this as an ebook or something I'm considering leaving these parts a single chapter! @Sparky

Anonymous
9/27/21, 4:36 PM
@Sparky i loved all of your predictions. the only one that i wouldn't like is number 3, since i love watching sam go from a straight guy to a bottom slut and watching mark being a power top - but sweet and caring for sam

@Anonymous
9/28/21, 5:52 AM
oh, with how things are developing in the story, including Sam actually admitting in this chapter that his 'ass is way more fun than his dick', I predict that if scenario 3 pans out the way I wrote then Sam will be thirsty as hell for Marc and having to fuck him to save him will literally be a heroic act of willpower lol That act may even be the last nail in the coffin for him and could trigger a change like "it's totally normal for straight guys to get fucked and guys with big cocks can't seem to stay away" as an ending to the story. But again, I'm just along for the ride, just like you so don't take my word for it ;)
9/28/21, 5:30 AM
Glad your back. Amazing finish and now that this story is done maybe we can see the next season of The Chip. :)
9/28/21, 3:28 AM
you have to continue this
9/28/21, 3:14 AM
will you do another chapter
Anonymous
9/28/21, 3:03 AM
I am loving this series. So hot!!!
Anonymous
9/28/21, 3:02 AM
Interesting! Can't wait for more!!!
9/28/21, 2:24 AM
interesting story. can't wait for more.
9/28/21, 1:51 AM
Interesting. I'm not usually into public himilation but there is some fun here. So can he control the crowd by saying "hey homophobes why don't you finger your ass as you watch him show off." Also i hope he shows off more of his ass. Hehe But yeah intriguing stuff here.
9/28/21, 1:11 AM
hot. will there be more.
9/28/21, 12:57 AM
love the story. can't wait for more.