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9/28/21, 12:57 AM
love the story. can't wait for more.
9/27/21, 7:44 PM
Amazing finish to this series! I love how you tied this and other stories together at the end. It's c;ear Jake can not only take care of his family, but they can all take care of each other. It was a wonderful journey. However, with the way the ending was written, it kinda feels very final; it's as though you're telling your audience that this is the end of not just this story, but your writing, and I hope that's not the case. You're one of the few writers on here that isn't extremely sadistic. Your writing is filled with love and care through forms of hypnosis. So I do hope you continue writing, I'd be glad to read anything you produce.

9/27/21, 11:53 PM
Thank you for your kind words. This series served as a prequel to all my other stories as an explanation to why, in my universe at least, there are so many instances of mind control or "influence." It may sounded too final but I'm not going to stop writing. I may take a break from 'this' universe but I do have other works I'm playing with that are more supernatural in nature that I'll upload later as I finish them. @Tempest888

9/28/21, 12:46 AM
I'm glad to hear that. Honestly so long as you keep writing, you'll always have an audience. I look forward to your more supernatural themed pieces. Fingers crossed to see some Werewolf appearances; I'm a little biased but writing supernatual stories can be hard, so i don't find too many well written werewolf related stories. Anyways, i hope you're doing well, and take care if yourself. @JoSmith
9/28/21, 12:40 AM
this is my all time favorite. thanks for the story
spiralthiago
9/28/21, 12:39 AM
muy bien ... no puedo dejar de leer tus historias hipnotizantes ... todas son geniales ... pero era necesario que los dos fueran al lugar y se sintieran extraños allí y luego se cayeran y se sintieran sexys y luego vestirsewith very provocative clothes ... and they have their first porn video ... then they go to the office already changed with more subjective clothes showing more open and sexy gays and taking others to that hypnosis ... missing continuation..please continue
9/28/21, 12:13 AM
You've definitely hooked me on this concept. Can't wait to see where it goes
9/27/21, 11:23 PM
drowning on cock and cum. Woof! I mean, Moo! I'm all caught up now, how sad. Now I must wait to read on.
9/27/21, 10:51 PM
A Hypnothrill classic! The King has returned. Your gradual description of the mental changes--especially as the guys become soft-brained, vacuously smiling himbos--is ALWAYS spot on. And I have a guess! I guess that Eduardo will be the one to resist, since he left the room before the last record played. We all know what's going to happen, but getting there is always AMAZING! :D
spiralthiago
9/27/21, 10:31 PM
exelent
9/27/21, 6:20 PM
i feel bad because nothing I write will capture HOW MUCH I LOVE THIS STORY! not only is it a fun sexy time - but its not mean spirited, and maybe its just me, but the way they make their changes when they're horny resonates with me in that moment cause im like - YEAH, sensitive nipples sound like a GREAT IDEA, when maybe more thought should go into it lol. the universe is fun and I reread the chapters OFTEN.

9/27/21, 10:30 PM
Oh wow! Thanks! I'm glad the horny, sometimes poorly thought out, edits are coming across as fun! @Thexshxboi
Anonymous
9/27/21, 10:21 PM
oh this is a delightful start. I can't wait to see if our hero will even be *able* to revert that silence command, given that it was *"forever".* The first command being so flippant and even humorous stuck is very good.