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9/27/21, 11:56 AM
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Oh, man, really? Oh, please don't tell me that's really the ending! How sad! well, I don't know what could be the saddest part: how abrupt the ending was; how sad it was, or that all of them will forget Milo and all his gifts! While I know it wasn't exactly a romantic story, you managed to make very likeable characters, and I enjoyed a lot with their interactions. I was hoping/expecting, that Milo couldn't go back for some reason or decided to stay with them. Don't get me wrong, I'm not complaining, I like it as much as the rest of the story, is just that it was an unexpected punch of sadness.
Mitch_CoRob
9/27/21, 11:33 AM
I really like it thus far and I am excited to read the second chapter! One note, I'd watch out for switching tenses during the story. It shifted from past to present tense midway through and it was a little jarring. Really great story though!
Geo
9/27/21, 8:59 AM
I'm personally holding out hope for Milo to show up at the lake after getting a pass to stay in the Old West since he did such a nice job making things fun in that time period. This series has been one of my all time favorites so I can't help but want more excuses to see more of Milo's sexy antics with rugged cowboys.
9/27/21, 7:55 AM
oh no! is this the end? but It was so beautiful! it could be a good ending but I wonder what else could happen after this too. thank you so much for this series! never failed to keep me on the edge!
Satyr Hedonist
9/27/21, 5:54 AM
Is that a real clip? I'd love to see it!
Dec 17, 2019
Anonymous
12/26/20, 12:29 AM
This is actually so cute and wholesome i live

9/27/21, 5:11 AM
Thank you
Anonymous
9/27/21, 5:04 AM
It could be more in series about this.
9/27/21, 4:49 AM
Can't stop thinking about this story. Can't wait for the next chapter!
9/27/21, 4:44 AM
As usual I absolutely love this :) can’t wait what’s in store for this series!
Willie Cici
9/27/21, 3:36 AM
Loved it. Hit all the buttons, H-thrill!!!

9/27/21, 4:14 AM
@Willie Cici Thanks! It wasn't intentional, but I think some aspects of this story really veer into Willie Cici territory (although I'm sure you would have included some details about the geography of the island).