Recent Comments

9/27/21, 12:06 AM
Please write another chapter and continue this (or make the story open)! It's so good! Definitely one of the better stories I've read!

9/27/21, 12:19 AM
@ls1999 I am chapter 3 is already over 1500 words and still not done.!! Just been busy and I need to do a halloween collab fic I'm doing with a friend. If you or any of you want to discuss this fic or maybe just smut in general, message me on my twitter!!
9/15/21, 10:42 AM
i really loved this story. its a nice reminder to be brave and make the changes in your life you want to see. Now i need to find my Jet.

9/27/21, 12:13 AM
You and me both! We'll find him, I know it. And in the meantime, we'll keep changing. That's the hope I was trying to instill! I'm glad you enjoyed it; that means a lot to me. @SirD
9/26/21, 9:00 PM
great setup so far. i cant wait to see where this goes!

9/27/21, 12:07 AM
@Behr Thanks! The fun is just getting started.
Anonymous
9/26/21, 11:53 PM
Excellent!!
9/26/21, 10:46 PM
I really enjoyed this and look forward to more chapters. Your style of writing conveys a warmth and depth of character and, while its written as a fantasy, this is a very realistic and relateable scenario that I know many would love to make a reality. Thank you for sharing
9/26/21, 10:32 PM
Interesting start. Waiting for the next chapter!
9/26/21, 9:53 PM
is the maneger also indocriated?
Anonymous
9/26/21, 9:02 PM
Oh man. As a west coast gay, Fire Island always seemed like a neat place. The idea of needing to get there by boat lends itself to a bit of a horror movie vibe as well. looking forward to a character trying to break out!
9/26/21, 8:40 PM
you never fail! this is a great start to the story. Looking forward to see if when Daniel's roommate arrives he puts up a fight and causes some dissonance among the other guests or if he falls right in line. Can't wait!

9/26/21, 8:44 PM
@BateFan Glad you're liking it so far! I'm about 10,000 words into the story right now, so I can share a small spoiler with you (although one that's foreshadowed in this chapter): we are going to get some major resistance from the one of the characters, but it's one who has already been introduced.
9/26/21, 8:34 PM
Please continue this story!