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9/26/21, 10:46 PM
I really enjoyed this and look forward to more chapters. Your style of writing conveys a warmth and depth of character and, while its written as a fantasy, this is a very realistic and relateable scenario that I know many would love to make a reality. Thank you for sharing
9/26/21, 10:32 PM
Interesting start. Waiting for the next chapter!
9/26/21, 9:53 PM
is the maneger also indocriated?
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9/26/21, 9:02 PM
Oh man. As a west coast gay, Fire Island always seemed like a neat place. The idea of needing to get there by boat lends itself to a bit of a horror movie vibe as well. looking forward to a character trying to break out!
9/26/21, 8:40 PM
you never fail! this is a great start to the story. Looking forward to see if when Daniel's roommate arrives he puts up a fight and causes some dissonance among the other guests or if he falls right in line. Can't wait!

9/26/21, 8:44 PM
@BateFan Glad you're liking it so far! I'm about 10,000 words into the story right now, so I can share a small spoiler with you (although one that's foreshadowed in this chapter): we are going to get some major resistance from the one of the characters, but it's one who has already been introduced.
9/26/21, 8:34 PM
Please continue this story!
9/26/21, 4:55 PM
Howdy! I just wanted to leave a quick comment to congratulate you on another wonderful chapter. I adore all the allusions you make to Greek Mythology as well as the care you've put into the names of characters. The prose is of great quality, and I quite like the premise and the world building. I do hope you'll keep it up. I check in every so often to see if there's a new chapter up. Personally, I'm hoping to see Jasper grow to enjoy the trappings of pet life. I did enjoy the sort of casual dominance of having a pet blow a coin under a table, and I'm quite curious whether or not Jasper might grow in time to be as needy and eager as Chal. I am curious what other modifications Aris might impose upon Jasper as well. I rather hope that all those layers of mental manipulation will still leave something that Rhys will like though. Call me a bit of a sap, but although I enjoy watching Jasper's induction into a pet, I rather like that thus far he has been a favored pet--with Rhys being almost "sweet" to him. I'm also quite curious what other realities of this world might make themselves known. In particular, the specifics of Coin societies and what prompted the caste system to exist in this world. I'm also curious to see what might come of the sub-plot with Jasper's old friends. The particulars of Rhys's previous pet are also of interest. I'm quite curious as to what "failed" in that attempt. My best to you and Cuddle-switch for sharing this interesting world with us! Best Wishes, ~Jayden

9/26/21, 7:37 PM
Hi @Jayden It's such a delight to see you pick up on and enjoy the different aspects of the story and the different elements we're working in. We both really appreciated your comment and getting to hear what you think a lot. Thank you so much! We're definitely hoping to work with a lot of the threads that you've mentioned, and some of your questions might even be answered in the upcoming chapters we're working on! From cuddle-Switch: "We may not get into the way that this culture and society evolved directly, but we do consider these questions often and have some ideas about it. Some of that should come out over time in the story! To me, it feels clear that Rhys is not one to be dominant to a long-term partner and not have there be some affection. I'm looking forward to seeing how that evolves, too! Thanks for reading!" Take care, Time & cuddle-Switch
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9/26/21, 7:32 PM
Ahhh...to be young again! Great start to what will likely be a great story.
9/26/21, 6:57 PM
This is *exactly* my type of porn. It's so close to what I usually write myself that it's inspired me to write something in a similar vein. I'd love to read more.
9/26/21, 6:52 PM
Thanks to @Elan_Musk for writing a story that not only made my dick hard but drew me into the room with his characters. Many of us live with these dilemmas as we navigate sexual thoughts and interaction. Musk engaged several devices that pushed far beyond the usual blk/white fodder sometimes written to offend rather than entertain, educate or normalize. Was pleased to observe use of: 1. Character vs self 2. Character vs. character 3. Character vs society 4. Character vs environment 5. Character vs fate (although factually specious) This new GSS registered user is also African-American and enjoyed the story and look forward to reading his others.