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2/26/25, 12:17 AM
Amazing! Can't wait to see what happens next.

2/26/25, 2:36 PM
@[JoshAllen](/user/show/10031013) Thanks Josh!
Himbro
2/26/25, 2:33 PM
Thanks everyone! I'm working on part 4 now!
2/26/25, 1:36 PM
You have been really good at portraying the dom/sub dynamic so well. The need for trust, control, authority. And not necessarily being sexual. But also the raw emotions of these two guys as the navigate this new reality. I have been gripped by every chapter. I'm glad that Alex wants more; let the real Dom Ethan step forward. How far will they go?
6/9/24, 3:14 PM
As I was reading this and holding off as best I could I was hoping Evan would gain super powers while his cock was buried in Shazam's ass, his hand wrapped around the dick of the defeated super sex slave and Evan's other hand pulling on a nipple. Hope you continue the adventures of this new super villain. Thanks for the explosive release.

Anonymous
2/26/25, 1:18 PM
@[TexMuscle](/user/show/10002223) I agree! ;)
2/26/25, 1:12 PM
Yup. This story is hitting all my buttons in the best way, in a way I didn’t expect. Can’t wait to see where it goes.
2/26/25, 12:42 PM
Woow. Good job. Can we expect more or it was just a teaser?

2/26/25, 12:53 PM
@[Iriefall](/user/show/10019488) I am on Part 5 right now. Finishing it. So there is much more to go.
2/26/25, 12:15 PM
I am sure this is something a little different but as it goes on. The more it goes in the direction people expect here. I promise.
2/26/25, 12:11 PM
I've read a ton of great stories here & elsewhere. Not a one of them is better than this one. You are a gifted writer with great insight into the power dynamic. I'm thrown back to my friend & college roommate being Ethan to my Alex. It's amazing. Thank you.
Anonymous
12/8/23, 8:51 AM
Oh man, I just realized I forgot to comment on how much I love the rubber cop squad! How could I let this happen?! Oh, right...I think I was trying to chime in on the discussion about heroes and villains winning and losing, but every time I started writing something it kept turning into a rambling discourse on the human condition(don't you just *hate* when that happens?). Anyway, yeah. I love drones, and I love men in uniform -- what could be better than drones in uniform? :heart_eyes: I especially love that they're *completely* covered, so the sunglass visors are literally their "eyes." And the badges! Be still my beating cock! I'd find it hard not to immediately commit a crime if I ran into them on the street! I guess I'm not a huge fan of the speaker mouths, but nobody's perfect. As for their boss, I'm not a fan of him at *all*, but as Officer 4 so astutely put it, *who* they serve isn't really a huge factor in the end(and if my guess is right, it won't even be an issue soon anyway). Overall, an exquisite conversion. I was already looking forward to seeing more of them, but you really knocked it out of the park. Can't wait to see what they get up to! Regarding how I think the chips should fall in the end, I'll try to limit myself just to commenting on how interesting it is that the so-called "heroes" and "villains" have begun to resemble each other so closely(looking at Burgundy and Tri-Hard in particular); it's almost like subscribing to those labels in the first place traps you and restricts your thinking :thinking:. I know you've played with philosophical concepts a bit in the past, so I'll leave you with a quote from one of my favorite thinkers: "What is done out of love always takes place beyond good and evil.”

12/8/23, 9:22 AM
@Anonymous Ah, yes,... Philosophy. It's a very _Nietzsche_ subject,... ha ha ha! Forgive me; we all have our weaknesses. I'm glad you liked the cop-drones! They get a bit of a focus in the next chapter as team **Tri-Hard** begins to escalate things on their end. Again, I'm going to skirt around the subject of 'blurred lines' and what constitutes a 'hero' and a 'villain' in regards to where the story is going,... but I will say a 'Hero' is no less flawed than anyone else; they simply make for a more beautiful disaster when those flaws are exposed and exploited!

Niko
2/26/25, 11:41 AM
@Anonymous "the chips should fall in the end" Ah, yes... Let's enlist the Californian Highway Patrol Squad's hunks as well! :grin:
2/26/25, 9:13 AM
The be careful what u wished for for. Nice