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9/25/21, 9:22 AM
I've loved every chapter of this thus far, can't wait for more.

9/25/21, 8:34 PM
Thanks! New chapters are in drafts! @NANOwriter

9/26/21, 2:39 AM
@bluesuedewho Awesome!
Jamiemboy
9/26/21, 1:38 AM
love the blond yellow touch with the hiviz :) i wanna read more about his first days as a worker drone!
Team Gabe
9/25/21, 6:36 PM
So as the handle suggests I am actually on Team Gabe, hoping for a bros happy ending. Sorry, Team Marc! After chapter 7 Gabe started to seem jealous as Sam notices Marc, and (maybe?) wished to be a superhero to compete. I also realized apparently all of Sam's sex have be brojobs except for the spontaneous solo orgasms. Well, now that's changed but hopefully Gabe will be tutoring Sam soon in ways that improve his prospects? Gabe may let slip tips for best pleasing an ultra-dom-top while bottoming. I wondered if Sam's last edit, worded "his first mental change" would misfire and undo all the earlier mental changes he edited. Would Marc be straight again, would straight guys getting off to gay porn no longer be a thing, and biggest of all could Sam be turned gay -err, that may still be on the table. Finally, Gabe might be getting wise to indirectly changing Sam, tuning that exercise change to dick-size like that. Maybe some more twinkification will happen by 'accident'? Anyway, I love this story and was checking in all week waiting for this chapter to drop. Thanks!

9/25/21, 7:27 PM
@Team Gabe I agree, they desrive a happy ending

Anonymous
9/25/21, 9:45 PM
@Team Gabe Ooooh, hmmm! I definitely read the "first mental change" thing as just Sam commenting on the fact that this was his first change without physically writing in the book, but it does seem like the changes made that way *hit* a bit differently so I guess there could be side effects? Still, idk, Team Gabe or not I think turning Marc straight again would rob the readers of a lot of hot moments lol...

9/25/21, 10:08 PM
Sorry, I didn't mean for that edit to be vague. Anon is right: it doesn't impact any previous changes with "mental effects" it just lets Sam edit the textbook with his mind going forward. @Team Gabe

Team Gabe
9/26/21, 12:12 AM
@bluesuedewho, oh I certainly didn't expect to be right on that score. I was just having fun speculating how the edit could go sideways and the odd word choice is a driver in these types of stories. You've just got me on the edge of my seat! Actually going that route would have undone two major premises, Sam identifying as straight and Marc as the implied 'will they or won't they'. I hope you don't mind the speculating or sharing of theories gone wrong for a chuckle, I don't mean it as what should have happened or anything.
9/25/21, 10:38 PM
i hope there is catharsis int he end and tanner is defeated. if he wins then ...... *shrugs* this story is not for me. i hate the tanner character.
9/25/21, 8:42 PM
Also, beautiful touch with each g-spot in his body being capable of its own, individual orgasm on top of building to a massive, collective singular orgasm. Very hot. I love the idea of him cumming a dozen times from different spots in his hole while he works the bumps of his dildo over each one. Just *chef's kiss*.

9/25/21, 8:53 PM
Thank you! I definitely have a thing for orgasms that go beyond realism in either number or form! @Noam de Pluma
Anonymous
9/25/21, 4:20 PM
loved the tits thing and i cant wait for more tutorings for sam (and i cant wait for the next marc and sam's interation)

9/25/21, 8:47 PM
Thanks! Marc isn't the star of the next chapter (that's a mystery...), but he has some scenes! @
9/25/21, 2:53 PM
So many things I loved in this chapter. The “Previously on…” was a great way to start and made me think of super hero comics. The sex tutoring idea, and it of course going wrong, was great and made for an extremely hot scene. “Gaborade” showing up with Danny and then getting a name later on with Gabe was really hot to me - I love little slight reality change ripples that don’t necessarily get explained. Sam scrolling through Marc’s social media stuff was extremely hot too, and I love that Sam is slowly starting to open up his thinking about Marc. I’m also excited to see Sam’s new nipples in action further. Another great chapter!

9/25/21, 8:46 PM
Thanks! I always appreciate your detailed feedback! @MonsterMash62
9/25/21, 8:26 PM
Enjoyed this chapter! The tutoring session was a great blend of funny and sexy.

9/25/21, 8:45 PM
Thank you! I don't quite know how the idea got into my head. @Hypnoguy67
Rubberdrone
9/25/21, 8:34 PM
this is so hot. wonder if the coach is a hunter... that might fall into the trap of being hunted by Matt....
9/25/21, 11:36 AM
loving this story! cant wait for more!

9/25/21, 8:34 PM
Thanks! @Badusername