Recent Comments

Ravenclaw
9/25/21, 12:27 PM
so good. please add more chapters.
9/25/21, 11:53 AM
Absolutely worth the wait! I love the suggestion that there may be a happy ending but I can't wait to see what other misadventures they all get up to before then!
9/22/21, 7:51 AM
Really good stuff! It fits really well on both sites. Best of luck in the contest!

9/25/21, 10:05 AM
@Norismo Thanks! Your story is also really good! But honestly, so few people posted for this contest, the result won't mean all that much... Math_Reez told me once he was surprised i didn't publish more on this site, given the fact a lot of my mind control stories have feel good and fluffy scenes, so yeah... I guess I'm just not used to putting the romance front and center. I'm kind of proud of how often I get 4 or 5 for the ideas rating, tho.
9/25/21, 9:11 AM
Quite the comeuppance.
9/25/21, 9:01 AM
The drawn-out change each step significant and a corruption as to narration Thanks for taking time to get Peter from one place to another. Coming to loathe tanner. The minor bits made him annoying. But this was repulsively unfair. But can appreciate his tastes. wonder what do next
9/25/21, 7:53 AM
if only that could be my job, jealous!
Jul 12, 2014
9/25/21, 7:33 AM
short but effective!
9/25/21, 6:59 AM
actually amazing
9/25/21, 5:57 AM
Hoo, this was *hot*. I didn’t fully understand the rules, but I get you were going for sexy. The rules are well-designed I’m sure, and because I trust that I can follow along as long as you guide me, if that makes sense! I’ll read the next one soon.
9/25/21, 4:23 AM
this was incredibly sexy. amazing story. hope we get to see a continuation