Recent Comments

9/25/21, 2:59 PM
Thank you very much S.Q.Neemie. I have waited impatiently for the next chapter. Checking the site for updates every day. It is by far the best story on this site right now. I must admit that the sudden change in pace took me by surprise. After the small changes in the first chapters I had imagined the pastor's decent into perversion would have been more gradual. On the other hand it is nice to see Tanner really flex his mind control-muscles and you described the pastor's grand fall wonderfully. I do hope that the pastor can learn to enjoy his new feelings instead of feeling repulsed all the time. I would like to see him actively encourage Tanner in his work with the guys to serve his own perverted needs. I do not know how I feel about the ending. I imagined that Tanner was just a "regular" mind controller targeting the congregation for the fun of it, but it seems like there might actually be a fight between good and evil going on. I did not think the story would need that element. Like Piko said. It is sad for the families, but I do hope Tanner wins.
9/25/21, 2:11 PM
This is one of the hottest series on this site right now. Each time I log on, I'm looking for the newest chapter. I hope this story goes on forever. Keep up the amazing work!
Ravenclaw
9/25/21, 12:27 PM
so good. please add more chapters.
9/25/21, 11:53 AM
Absolutely worth the wait! I love the suggestion that there may be a happy ending but I can't wait to see what other misadventures they all get up to before then!
9/22/21, 7:51 AM
Really good stuff! It fits really well on both sites. Best of luck in the contest!

9/25/21, 10:05 AM
@Norismo Thanks! Your story is also really good! But honestly, so few people posted for this contest, the result won't mean all that much... Math_Reez told me once he was surprised i didn't publish more on this site, given the fact a lot of my mind control stories have feel good and fluffy scenes, so yeah... I guess I'm just not used to putting the romance front and center. I'm kind of proud of how often I get 4 or 5 for the ideas rating, tho.
9/25/21, 9:11 AM
Quite the comeuppance.
9/25/21, 9:01 AM
The drawn-out change each step significant and a corruption as to narration Thanks for taking time to get Peter from one place to another. Coming to loathe tanner. The minor bits made him annoying. But this was repulsively unfair. But can appreciate his tastes. wonder what do next
9/25/21, 7:53 AM
if only that could be my job, jealous!
Jul 12, 2014
9/25/21, 7:33 AM
short but effective!
9/25/21, 6:59 AM
actually amazing