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singavoyeur
9/24/21, 10:19 AM
[Link](https://docs.google.com/document/d/1jZ1fCaGXOrvaOSheytWto2Tnr1SPdCMi/edit?usp=sharing&ouid=106913408587546912571&rtpof=true&sd=true) Here is the original. The last saved copy I have is dated 2008 though it's possible I wrote it earlier.
9/21/21, 3:22 AM
a lil confused about the clients goals. I get the motive but what did he want? To break up the couple? destroy Jason's life? have him for himself? otherwise nice story (though I second the above comment).

singavoyeur
9/24/21, 10:02 AM
@BlondieBoy I was inspired to write this story based on a similar concept where the victim was a girl and the client was another girl in school. It was written over 10 (possibly 15-20) years ago and the original was something I read from assgm (not sure if you guys are old enough to remember). The client here is just a rich high school kid (though it should be junior college as this was set in Singapore where I'm from) who basically wants to get revenge on the popular dude who stole his girlfriend from him... when you are that young and possibly reckless, do you really need to have any clear motivation other than sick revenge? A bit over the top though to come up with this elaborate plan just for the sake of it but hey... as long as the deed is done why not? ;)
9/24/21, 8:47 AM
I would love to see another chapter to this where Sir re enters! would love to see these 4 serve their master.
9/24/21, 6:23 AM
i remember this story! any chance for a continuation?
9/24/21, 12:44 AM
5 stars in every category!!! This one is up there with the best of cock sucking stories. On top of that, you excelled at the mental aspect of taking cock down the throat and submitting to its absolute dominance. Woof! I mean, Moo! And Lt Barber becoming a recruiter to increase the size of the herd, Megawoof and Megamoo!

Yourguy92
9/24/21, 5:13 AM
I didn't succeed, but white collar did. @PupScout
9/22/21, 8:59 AM
Say, this is a really interesting story! There are all sorts of tantalizing plot threads: Gwen's magic, Nick's "zone" (which also seems to be some kind of enchantment), the evolution of sub/dom relationships...plus it's nice to see an author acknowledge both the fluidity of sexuality AND the importance of consent (Darius refusing to be intimate with a drunk Nick). I can't wait to see what happens next!

Kods
9/24/21, 3:17 AM
Thank you for the comment! I Can't wait to share the next chapter!
9/24/21, 2:22 AM
Hot as fuck, as usual! I love it, but the last lines made my heart sink. Is the ending near? Oh, my God, NOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!! I love this story more than what I can say, and the idea of saying goodbye to the characters hurts A LOT! Don't get me wrong, I respect your creative choices and if you decide to put an end to this story I would totally understand. But I hope the message on Milo's pocket watch to be something to inject fuel to the plot, and not the swan song of this epic insanely hot tale.
9/24/21, 1:31 AM
The good thing about being out for two weeks is that now I have two chapters of my favorite stories to read in a row, ha, ha! I was wondering if there going to manage the thing of the fat nicknames, you did it great. The puppy play was a nice surprise, but the dialogues steal the show on this one, ha, ha.

Oddballs
9/24/21, 1:54 AM
@Plymouth58 I'm happy you like this installment :'3 I always look forward to your comments and reviews.
Kale
9/24/21, 12:59 AM
too bad this story has not continued. great work!
9/23/21, 5:43 AM
Amazing as always! I'm looking forward to see the spin off of Mr. Arthur's series and also next chapter for this hot series. Can't wait!

9/23/21, 11:16 PM
Thanks @ikpooo! I have a few ideas to work on, stay tuned! :)