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9/21/21, 2:40 PM
Wow! This is a really creative setting!

9/21/21, 11:25 PM
@bluesuedewho That’s high praise to me, knowing how cool your ideas are, too! I can’t claim it as entirely my own—I developed it with friends a year or so ago and have been fleshing out ever since. I’m excited to explore it with y’all and I hope you continue to enjoy the ideas!

9/21/21, 11:45 PM
I'm particularly intrigued by Firecrackers! :eyes: I've re-read this a couple times to make sure I'm getting all the world-building clues about the different castes (or whatever the in-universe term is for the different types of guys). Hopefully we get to see more of Johnny in future chapters! @Soren Fitz

9/22/21, 7:26 AM
@bluesuedewho You’re a good reader! Trust that your efforts to get clues are not in vain. I’m no Steven Erikson, but I still like giving the readers some ideas about what’s coming next before I explicitly explain it. Also, I’m over the moon that you reread it! 🥰

9/22/21, 6:06 PM
Okay, I read it again and I have a bonkers theory about Firecrackers based on Robbie seeming to disappear and reappear. I think Firecrackers can temporarily turn the guys they fuck into cum? (Which has cleaning properties, hence "treating" the house). Then the guy reforms after some time? Looking forward to the next chapter! @Soren Fitz

9/22/21, 6:25 PM
You are *so* close. However, there’s a part of it that I changed a little later that I unfortunately forgot to clue in as part of this chapter, so the full answer will be revealed soon… But your bonkers theory is so close to right that I’m screaming, heh. @bluesuedewho
9/22/21, 5:53 PM
I always look forward to your stories. Thank you for writing this series. I ticks off many boxes for me: brainwashing, mass enslavement, and drones.
9/22/21, 3:30 PM
I loved this chapter, even with no super crazy edits making an impact it was very interesting to see a sort of glimpse into the possible other magical forces of this planet with Alice. The scene with Marc using his magic dick for good was also amazing! I loved the cliffhanger with Gabe disappearing and I also wonder what Gabe's edit was that he made in the bathroom. Keep up the awesome work!
9/22/21, 1:41 PM
Well, Alice was an unexpected delight. "Cattywampus," I mean, honestly. I will admit that I was missing the sex in this chapter, but overall I'm still very invested in how all of this plays out. I'm intrigued as to how the tutoring edit affected reality to the point that Gabe was no longer beside Sam after he made that (retroactive) change. My guess is he's giving or getting tutoring, and had a session booked in his schedule, and now he has two sets of memories for the same time frame (seeing Marc go all superhero at the book store, and having sexy tutor time), which will only confuse things further.

9/22/21, 3:23 PM
The next chapter (posting this week, fingers crossed) has a lot more sex that this chapter sets up. I wanted to let the plot reveals breathe a bit. @Noam de Pluma
9/22/21, 1:35 PM
That was great! More hints about how Zeke’s butt works, with plus aliens, huge balls and cum fountaining from Zeke’s mouth. I’m very excited again to read more.

9/22/21, 2:20 PM
We aim to please, @MonsterMash62. It's a a lot of fun teasing out the rules for Zeke's hole. You'll get even more clarity next chapter ;P
9/22/21, 1:16 PM
Quite the twist! I really enjoy the mix of sex and humor in this story.

9/22/21, 2:18 PM
Thanks, @bluesuedewho! It's fun to write, and I'm glad it's connecting with you. Cheers!
9/22/21, 11:28 AM
I'm excited for this to debut, you've been so enthusiastic about it on the Discord! This is hot as hell and I'm very *very* excited to see more of it! Well done, man!

9/22/21, 1:56 PM
@Dace I’m excited about your enthusiasm! (The italics on “very” really took the cake for me.) It warms my heart to know you find it so hot. I’m looking forward to getting everyone more!
9/21/21, 12:58 PM
Bravo! I love stories that deal with a character's perception of reality getting messed with. It helps amp up the psychological horror that is implicit in all mind control erotica.

9/22/21, 1:35 PM
@ParadoxBear Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. It was my first story mixing mind control, erotica and horror. It's good to see it worked well ^^
9/22/21, 4:32 AM
I'm always such a sucker for oblivious stories! so

9/22/21, 12:19 PM
@BlondieBoy hahah thank you I am too
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9/22/21, 12:06 PM
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