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9/22/21, 5:53 PM
I always look forward to your stories. Thank you for writing this series. I ticks off many boxes for me: brainwashing, mass enslavement, and drones.
9/22/21, 3:30 PM
I loved this chapter, even with no super crazy edits making an impact it was very interesting to see a sort of glimpse into the possible other magical forces of this planet with Alice. The scene with Marc using his magic dick for good was also amazing! I loved the cliffhanger with Gabe disappearing and I also wonder what Gabe's edit was that he made in the bathroom. Keep up the awesome work!
9/22/21, 1:41 PM
Well, Alice was an unexpected delight. "Cattywampus," I mean, honestly. I will admit that I was missing the sex in this chapter, but overall I'm still very invested in how all of this plays out. I'm intrigued as to how the tutoring edit affected reality to the point that Gabe was no longer beside Sam after he made that (retroactive) change. My guess is he's giving or getting tutoring, and had a session booked in his schedule, and now he has two sets of memories for the same time frame (seeing Marc go all superhero at the book store, and having sexy tutor time), which will only confuse things further.

9/22/21, 3:23 PM
The next chapter (posting this week, fingers crossed) has a lot more sex that this chapter sets up. I wanted to let the plot reveals breathe a bit. @Noam de Pluma
9/22/21, 1:35 PM
That was great! More hints about how Zeke’s butt works, with plus aliens, huge balls and cum fountaining from Zeke’s mouth. I’m very excited again to read more.

9/22/21, 2:20 PM
We aim to please, @MonsterMash62. It's a a lot of fun teasing out the rules for Zeke's hole. You'll get even more clarity next chapter ;P
9/22/21, 1:16 PM
Quite the twist! I really enjoy the mix of sex and humor in this story.

9/22/21, 2:18 PM
Thanks, @bluesuedewho! It's fun to write, and I'm glad it's connecting with you. Cheers!
9/22/21, 11:28 AM
I'm excited for this to debut, you've been so enthusiastic about it on the Discord! This is hot as hell and I'm very *very* excited to see more of it! Well done, man!

9/22/21, 1:56 PM
@Dace I’m excited about your enthusiasm! (The italics on “very” really took the cake for me.) It warms my heart to know you find it so hot. I’m looking forward to getting everyone more!
9/21/21, 12:58 PM
Bravo! I love stories that deal with a character's perception of reality getting messed with. It helps amp up the psychological horror that is implicit in all mind control erotica.

9/22/21, 1:35 PM
@ParadoxBear Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. It was my first story mixing mind control, erotica and horror. It's good to see it worked well ^^
9/22/21, 4:32 AM
I'm always such a sucker for oblivious stories! so

9/22/21, 12:19 PM
@BlondieBoy hahah thank you I am too
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9/22/21, 12:06 PM
Pakistanis are not Arabs
9/22/21, 11:26 AM
Great job! Would love to see what other changes happen in the neighborhood now Alex has moved in.