Recent Comments

9/22/21, 12:50 AM
Very well done! You covered a great amount of details in the room, the light and wood panel - i could envision the rooms and training center. I loved the build up and the twists of who hired Mr Anderson and why. But what really got me going was the twist of Mr Tang confronting Jason and the simi-hypnotic state, that was awesome. Really cool how Mr Tang forcefully said he's not paying jason's fees and told Anderson he addressed Jason's escort service with the boy ;) - Love to ready more about the Rugby Captain...
Anonymous
9/22/21, 12:35 AM
This is so good! I love the induction and Kazuma's resistance and eventual downfall. The mix-up of him/ her didn't bother me much. Hope you make chapter 2!!
9/22/21, 12:26 AM
The last scene really nails the balance between sweet and hot! I loved it!
Anonymous
9/22/21, 12:24 AM
Great story and very hot but imho Amir is coming off as a jerk. Maybe he should get his comeuppance before it all ends? ;)
9/22/21, 12:14 AM
great start. cant wait for the next chapter
9/20/21, 8:31 AM
Ah, just as good as I remember 😂. Definitely intrigued to see what happens next.

9/21/21, 10:44 PM
@Norismo Thanks for reading it again! And I’m always happy for comments. I’m looking forward to writing more and evolving this story in great directions. Thanks for the help, too!
Lampshade15
9/21/21, 10:19 PM
This is one of the hottest stories I've read on here for a long time. You're off to an amazing start for your first story here! The only thing I wouldn't be mad about would be the woman's thong but it was very easy to glance over and it's just my own personal preference. Everything else though, my god, it really pushed all the right buttons. I can't wait to read any of your future work!!!!!
9/21/21, 9:42 PM
I was hoping to discover myself shackled to one of the other milking posts next to the protagonist. Oh well, that'll be my fantasy tonight... I'm LOVING this story -- please let it be fifty more parts.

Yourguy92
9/21/21, 9:58 PM
@absman420 there are plenty more parts and they also develop other aspects that are not only focusing on the Milk Bar inside. But since I'm a fan of your stories and knowing you like rough content, you'd like it.
Mar 6, 2019
9/21/21, 9:52 PM
Reminds me of an old story about Batman and Robin meet Muscleman. Plots were different but both were good and this one got me hard.
9/21/21, 9:51 PM
EXTRAORDINARIO...