Recent Comments

9/22/21, 12:26 AM
The last scene really nails the balance between sweet and hot! I loved it!
Anonymous
9/22/21, 12:24 AM
Great story and very hot but imho Amir is coming off as a jerk. Maybe he should get his comeuppance before it all ends? ;)
9/22/21, 12:14 AM
great start. cant wait for the next chapter
9/20/21, 8:31 AM
Ah, just as good as I remember 😂. Definitely intrigued to see what happens next.

9/21/21, 10:44 PM
@Norismo Thanks for reading it again! And I’m always happy for comments. I’m looking forward to writing more and evolving this story in great directions. Thanks for the help, too!
Lampshade15
9/21/21, 10:19 PM
This is one of the hottest stories I've read on here for a long time. You're off to an amazing start for your first story here! The only thing I wouldn't be mad about would be the woman's thong but it was very easy to glance over and it's just my own personal preference. Everything else though, my god, it really pushed all the right buttons. I can't wait to read any of your future work!!!!!
9/21/21, 9:42 PM
I was hoping to discover myself shackled to one of the other milking posts next to the protagonist. Oh well, that'll be my fantasy tonight... I'm LOVING this story -- please let it be fifty more parts.

Yourguy92
9/21/21, 9:58 PM
@absman420 there are plenty more parts and they also develop other aspects that are not only focusing on the Milk Bar inside. But since I'm a fan of your stories and knowing you like rough content, you'd like it.
Mar 6, 2019
9/21/21, 9:52 PM
Reminds me of an old story about Batman and Robin meet Muscleman. Plots were different but both were good and this one got me hard.
9/21/21, 9:51 PM
EXTRAORDINARIO...
Anonymous
9/21/21, 9:06 PM
Fantastic new story in this exciting drone universe!
9/21/21, 7:46 PM
I really like this chapter, but I just wish we got to see a little more of the resistance to the mass brainwashing, rather than hearing about it second-hand. That time jump in the middle of the story skipped over the part I think I would have found the most arousing.