Recent Comments

9/19/21, 9:50 PM
Super sexy and fun story. So many elements of it had me going "ooh yeah!" So yeah, great stuff. Looking forward to seeing more in the story. There is much here that hits the stop!

9/21/21, 3:40 PM
@Heru Kane I’m glad it hit the spot for you. It definitely hits it for me and I had a ton of fun writing it! I hope you enjoy all the rest, too.
9/3/21, 9:33 PM
This continues to keep my dick interested. Well done!

Yourguy92
9/4/21, 9:03 PM
@absman420 kudos to white collar, I've not written it but just read it for years and felt it needs to be here. I think I might end the story earlier because it got lost in the storyline in my opinion and got too much into sm

Anonymous
9/21/21, 1:45 PM
@Yourguy92 I already find it borderline dubious for you to repost without the original author's permission but it is not for you to change the original story that way if you are going to repost it. Maybe you can write your own version at some point.

9/21/21, 1:48 PM
that sounded ominous. *not cool* for you is what I meant to say. I seem to have accidentally marked the comment as anonymous so I can't edit it ^^.

Yourguy92
9/21/21, 2:00 PM
@time.to.occur 1. thanks for your feedback, but I tried to reach out to that person years ago and wasn't successful. 2. I mention regularly that it is not my story and people get that. 3. I have not changed a single word from the original because that wouldn't be respectful. Please read the original story before making false claims - I am aware that it's borderline I just repost the story but since there is no financial interest in the contest for none of us, I don't infringe any laws. Certainly. I'm not changing something.

9/21/21, 2:03 PM
@Yourguy92 I am *specifically* referring to what you said in your above comment about ending the story early because it isn't to your tastes. That is a form of editing and changing, and that's why I decided to say something.

Yourguy92
9/21/21, 2:22 PM
@time.to.occur got it and thanks for stating that. I agree that was not a nice idea and I won't do it for the points you mentioned. I just didn't correct my thought while I should have done so

9/21/21, 3:24 PM
@Yourguy92 no worries! feels like we're on the same page, and I'm glad you understand why I felt like I should say something!
9/21/21, 2:27 PM
Fantastic
Rubber_Lover14
9/19/21, 11:46 PM
First, thanks for mentioning me at the start. It was super sweet of you to do that :D Second, this story, as always, is amazingly kinky and i love it! I saw that u said you wrote this drunk, and i must say, props to you for writing such an amazingly kinky turn on of a story. I already love this series and I'm curious as to see what else is in store for poor little brainwashed Tommy. Again, amazingly story. Cant wait to see what happens next ^^

9/20/21, 9:10 AM
@Rubber_Lover14 ahaha thank you so much. I probs wont continue this and am trying several ideas for some kinky stories :) If u have a cool idea for mind control just lmk it might inspire some writing <3 ty

Rubber_Lover14
9/20/21, 6:29 PM
@burntoutmilk hmmm. U looking 4 ideas? Well, i have afew A sweaty jock that us his musky unwashed gym socks, drugs, manipulation and hypnosis (maybe a bit of degradation 👀) to slowly train his best friend to be his slave A single father who gets sick of his sons arrogant behavior, and decides his son is better off as a slave/pet/gimp, rather than a person A small guy slips and falls into his huge coaches massive gym bag. He tries to get out, but before he can, his coach unknowingly buries him in his freshly removed gym clothes, zips up the bag, and heads home. Only finding the boy much later, with the boys brain temporarily dumbed down from the musk. He decides to keep him, brainwashing him and locking him away to be his sex toy. Friends handcuff their arrogant/innocent friend to a public urinal and leave him for the night. The boy gets used, abused, teased and, of course, out to work. The next morning they return, but hes already been claimed and taken to be properly trained Some of these suit your needs? Idk, most of these i imagine the dom as arrogant and mean and cruel to his slaves. They may work better as slow burns (multi part series/into the orange category of length). Let me know if u want more! Im kinky af do i have plenty to share

9/21/21, 11:15 AM
@Rubber_Lover14 These ideas r amazing but im currently working on a more light hearted mind control story lol im not rlly into writing anything too mean arrogant cruel (even tho i do enjoy those stories sometimes) but thank you <3
Sep 15, 2009
9/21/21, 7:01 AM
super hot! would love to be the bottom here.
Jack
9/21/21, 6:21 AM
Goddamn. When I read the first chapter, I wasn't totally sure I was going to like it. I was definitely wrong! I have to say that this was some seriously good shit. Hot sex, a short but powerful plot, and some fucking amazing first-person writing. Gotta hand it to you, Author. Well done.
9/21/21, 3:54 AM
one of the hottest stories i have ever read, this is definitely one i am going to jack myself off to/rub my clit to many times over. Dont you love it when it feels like an author reached into your subconscious and tapped into one of your biggest fantasies and then to top it off puts it down in such eloquently written words.... EXCELLENT WORK!
9/19/21, 8:59 PM
Awesome story. My main question is, will Marco fall in love with Prince Ariel when he comes? I hope I don't have to wit to long to find out. Can't wait for the next chapter.

9/21/21, 3:11 AM
@Jonanator I’m glad you liked it! Things aren’t going to be resolved so easily, unfortunately—but I think it’ll be fun reading, and there won’t be long-term unresolved drama. I can’t wait to finish and publish the next one! (Except I can, because I have to in order not to write it badly.)

9/21/21, 3:22 AM
@Soren Fitz ok then. can't wait
9/21/21, 1:55 AM
my favorite type of writing/stories! good plots, lots of details, twists and turns. I was thinking though, i thought the real mesmero had cut his sideburn so they can be told apart from his twin...
Buckyboi
9/21/21, 1:33 AM
Glad he got what was coming to him.