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9/21/21, 1:55 AM
my favorite type of writing/stories! good plots, lots of details, twists and turns. I was thinking though, i thought the real mesmero had cut his sideburn so they can be told apart from his twin...
Buckyboi
9/21/21, 1:33 AM
Glad he got what was coming to him.
9/21/21, 12:55 AM
I'm glad I clicked on this! I really liked it! Congrats on your first GSS story! For some reason my mind initially misread the title as "Barberhood" and combined with the summary made me picture a "Highlander" situation but with magic barbers. A more detailed summary might help get more eyes on this story!
9/21/21, 12:14 AM
Such a well-written and hot story. You capture Ed's downfall so perfectly. Great work!
9/20/21, 11:13 PM
Great description of Delaney experiencing the cum from the beaker. Like a good wine tasting. And intrigue at the end. Moo!
Anonymous
9/20/21, 10:52 PM
Love Steve's oblivious transformation so far! Looking forward to part 3!
9/20/21, 4:56 PM
I love the premise of this story and its be careful what you wish for element. I especially like the increasing creepiness with each change and the subtle clues that the guys are being taken over. The full reveal after a hot sex scene was really well-written. However, now I want to know more about the mirror. How did the "guys" get trapped in there? Are they humans? Monsters? Will the guys that are now trapped eventually become like the ones that were released and the cycle continues again? Basically, I'd love what would amount to a director's cut of a movie. Well done! Glad to see another of your stories here.

9/20/21, 9:01 PM
Thanks Proteus! I'm glad you get the creeeping creepiness - I'm never sure how much foreshadowing I should do. Whatever it is, it's got to be enough that you can brush it off and just enjoy the sexual tension... until it's too late. As for the mirror-things, they're not strictly 'guys' so much as they're ancient demons who were tricked into the mirror by a sorcerer in the middle ages. He promised them unending paradise, but it turns out that's torture. Not being mortal, they were able to break through the walls between their fantasies and eventually able to escape (with Jake's help). I don't think Jake and the others will be able to do the same, though eternity is long, and who knows? Not that I've thought about the back story at all.
9/20/21, 5:54 PM
Loved this! Wish we had gotten a little bit more detail on the cock that Ter lost, and whether that was "stolen" by Alex, or simply made smaller. Either way, really hot story!
Anonymous
9/20/21, 4:38 PM
Plz make more. So hot!!
9/20/21, 9:48 AM
Excellent story! I think Rod Serling would be proud--a classic example of the temptations of power. Question: do you use episodes of "The Twilight Zone" as direct inspiration? This tale has traces of the 1980's revival's "Shatterday" (A man's reflection gradually takes over his life) and the original's "A Nice Place to Visit" (which gave us the classic "Whoever said you were in HEAVEN, Mr. Valentine? This **is** the Other Place!"). Love it!

9/20/21, 3:39 PM
Thanks! I don’t use TZ episodes as direct inspiration, though obviously the format owes itself to Serling. I actually never watched the revival, only the classic series. This story came around because I wanted to write a story about envy and self-image. I came up with “I should use a magic mirror”, and then ‘hottest of them all’ just showed up. It actually took several rewrites before I settled on what you saw. In my favourite idea that I just couldn’t make work, Jacob would ask his question to the mirror and be shown the hottest version of himself. He reaches out and touches the mirror and finds himself transported to a parallel reality where everyone is super hot, and so his not-model-perfect looks make him one of the most unusually beautiful men alive. Meanwhile his counterpart has been transported to our reality, where he’s having quite a lot of sex. The theme of that one was more around the subjectivity of what we envy.