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9/21/21, 3:54 AM
one of the hottest stories i have ever read, this is definitely one i am going to jack myself off to/rub my clit to many times over. Dont you love it when it feels like an author reached into your subconscious and tapped into one of your biggest fantasies and then to top it off puts it down in such eloquently written words.... EXCELLENT WORK!
9/19/21, 8:59 PM
Awesome story. My main question is, will Marco fall in love with Prince Ariel when he comes? I hope I don't have to wit to long to find out. Can't wait for the next chapter.

9/21/21, 3:11 AM
@Jonanator I’m glad you liked it! Things aren’t going to be resolved so easily, unfortunately—but I think it’ll be fun reading, and there won’t be long-term unresolved drama. I can’t wait to finish and publish the next one! (Except I can, because I have to in order not to write it badly.)

9/21/21, 3:22 AM
@Soren Fitz ok then. can't wait
9/21/21, 1:55 AM
my favorite type of writing/stories! good plots, lots of details, twists and turns. I was thinking though, i thought the real mesmero had cut his sideburn so they can be told apart from his twin...
Buckyboi
9/21/21, 1:33 AM
Glad he got what was coming to him.
9/21/21, 12:55 AM
I'm glad I clicked on this! I really liked it! Congrats on your first GSS story! For some reason my mind initially misread the title as "Barberhood" and combined with the summary made me picture a "Highlander" situation but with magic barbers. A more detailed summary might help get more eyes on this story!
9/21/21, 12:14 AM
Such a well-written and hot story. You capture Ed's downfall so perfectly. Great work!
9/20/21, 11:13 PM
Great description of Delaney experiencing the cum from the beaker. Like a good wine tasting. And intrigue at the end. Moo!
Anonymous
9/20/21, 10:52 PM
Love Steve's oblivious transformation so far! Looking forward to part 3!
9/20/21, 4:56 PM
I love the premise of this story and its be careful what you wish for element. I especially like the increasing creepiness with each change and the subtle clues that the guys are being taken over. The full reveal after a hot sex scene was really well-written. However, now I want to know more about the mirror. How did the "guys" get trapped in there? Are they humans? Monsters? Will the guys that are now trapped eventually become like the ones that were released and the cycle continues again? Basically, I'd love what would amount to a director's cut of a movie. Well done! Glad to see another of your stories here.

9/20/21, 9:01 PM
Thanks Proteus! I'm glad you get the creeeping creepiness - I'm never sure how much foreshadowing I should do. Whatever it is, it's got to be enough that you can brush it off and just enjoy the sexual tension... until it's too late. As for the mirror-things, they're not strictly 'guys' so much as they're ancient demons who were tricked into the mirror by a sorcerer in the middle ages. He promised them unending paradise, but it turns out that's torture. Not being mortal, they were able to break through the walls between their fantasies and eventually able to escape (with Jake's help). I don't think Jake and the others will be able to do the same, though eternity is long, and who knows? Not that I've thought about the back story at all.
9/20/21, 5:54 PM
Loved this! Wish we had gotten a little bit more detail on the cock that Ter lost, and whether that was "stolen" by Alex, or simply made smaller. Either way, really hot story!