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Sep 15, 2009
9/21/21, 7:01 AM
super hot! would love to be the bottom here.
Jack
9/21/21, 6:21 AM
Goddamn. When I read the first chapter, I wasn't totally sure I was going to like it. I was definitely wrong! I have to say that this was some seriously good shit. Hot sex, a short but powerful plot, and some fucking amazing first-person writing. Gotta hand it to you, Author. Well done.
9/21/21, 3:54 AM
one of the hottest stories i have ever read, this is definitely one i am going to jack myself off to/rub my clit to many times over. Dont you love it when it feels like an author reached into your subconscious and tapped into one of your biggest fantasies and then to top it off puts it down in such eloquently written words.... EXCELLENT WORK!
9/19/21, 8:59 PM
Awesome story. My main question is, will Marco fall in love with Prince Ariel when he comes? I hope I don't have to wit to long to find out. Can't wait for the next chapter.

9/21/21, 3:11 AM
@Jonanator I’m glad you liked it! Things aren’t going to be resolved so easily, unfortunately—but I think it’ll be fun reading, and there won’t be long-term unresolved drama. I can’t wait to finish and publish the next one! (Except I can, because I have to in order not to write it badly.)

9/21/21, 3:22 AM
@Soren Fitz ok then. can't wait
9/21/21, 1:55 AM
my favorite type of writing/stories! good plots, lots of details, twists and turns. I was thinking though, i thought the real mesmero had cut his sideburn so they can be told apart from his twin...
Buckyboi
9/21/21, 1:33 AM
Glad he got what was coming to him.
9/21/21, 12:55 AM
I'm glad I clicked on this! I really liked it! Congrats on your first GSS story! For some reason my mind initially misread the title as "Barberhood" and combined with the summary made me picture a "Highlander" situation but with magic barbers. A more detailed summary might help get more eyes on this story!
9/21/21, 12:14 AM
Such a well-written and hot story. You capture Ed's downfall so perfectly. Great work!
9/20/21, 11:13 PM
Great description of Delaney experiencing the cum from the beaker. Like a good wine tasting. And intrigue at the end. Moo!
Anonymous
9/20/21, 10:52 PM
Love Steve's oblivious transformation so far! Looking forward to part 3!