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Anonymous
9/20/21, 10:52 PM
Love Steve's oblivious transformation so far! Looking forward to part 3!
9/20/21, 4:56 PM
I love the premise of this story and its be careful what you wish for element. I especially like the increasing creepiness with each change and the subtle clues that the guys are being taken over. The full reveal after a hot sex scene was really well-written. However, now I want to know more about the mirror. How did the "guys" get trapped in there? Are they humans? Monsters? Will the guys that are now trapped eventually become like the ones that were released and the cycle continues again? Basically, I'd love what would amount to a director's cut of a movie. Well done! Glad to see another of your stories here.

9/20/21, 9:01 PM
Thanks Proteus! I'm glad you get the creeeping creepiness - I'm never sure how much foreshadowing I should do. Whatever it is, it's got to be enough that you can brush it off and just enjoy the sexual tension... until it's too late. As for the mirror-things, they're not strictly 'guys' so much as they're ancient demons who were tricked into the mirror by a sorcerer in the middle ages. He promised them unending paradise, but it turns out that's torture. Not being mortal, they were able to break through the walls between their fantasies and eventually able to escape (with Jake's help). I don't think Jake and the others will be able to do the same, though eternity is long, and who knows? Not that I've thought about the back story at all.
9/20/21, 5:54 PM
Loved this! Wish we had gotten a little bit more detail on the cock that Ter lost, and whether that was "stolen" by Alex, or simply made smaller. Either way, really hot story!
Anonymous
9/20/21, 4:38 PM
Plz make more. So hot!!
9/20/21, 9:48 AM
Excellent story! I think Rod Serling would be proud--a classic example of the temptations of power. Question: do you use episodes of "The Twilight Zone" as direct inspiration? This tale has traces of the 1980's revival's "Shatterday" (A man's reflection gradually takes over his life) and the original's "A Nice Place to Visit" (which gave us the classic "Whoever said you were in HEAVEN, Mr. Valentine? This **is** the Other Place!"). Love it!

9/20/21, 3:39 PM
Thanks! I don’t use TZ episodes as direct inspiration, though obviously the format owes itself to Serling. I actually never watched the revival, only the classic series. This story came around because I wanted to write a story about envy and self-image. I came up with “I should use a magic mirror”, and then ‘hottest of them all’ just showed up. It actually took several rewrites before I settled on what you saw. In my favourite idea that I just couldn’t make work, Jacob would ask his question to the mirror and be shown the hottest version of himself. He reaches out and touches the mirror and finds himself transported to a parallel reality where everyone is super hot, and so his not-model-perfect looks make him one of the most unusually beautiful men alive. Meanwhile his counterpart has been transported to our reality, where he’s having quite a lot of sex. The theme of that one was more around the subjectivity of what we envy.
9/20/21, 3:37 PM
wish this had a part 2
Freckleman64
9/20/21, 5:36 AM
So creepy! I got chills in the middle of jerking off! But also so hot. Another great story, thanks so much :)

9/20/21, 3:31 PM
Hah - thanks! If you liked the sensation, be sure to check out screamingmoist’s work (if you don’t know it already). He does a brilliant mix of sex and horror.
9/20/21, 11:18 AM
Hey Pup Don, when are we going to see what happens to Mike. Your series is so hot that I can't wait to see more.

9/20/21, 2:11 PM
@Doug Kent It will probably be next week sometime. I start a new job today and my mind is occupied at the moment. But I know where the story is going. I just need to write it. I'm planning on working on it over the weekend.

9/20/21, 2:12 PM
@Doug Kent Thank you for the compliment. ☺
9/20/21, 11:32 AM
It would be so cruel and funny if Melanie had already been turned gay due to the earlier edits when Sam goes to date her. Although this makes me wonder a few things about this world. Obviously it leans towards making people gay, but how are bi and trans people affected?

9/20/21, 1:42 PM
More people realize that they're bi with experimentation being more common. I haven't thought much about how trans people would be affected since none of the characters are trans, but presumably they'd be more likely to be gay or bi in this reality. @RainbowMika91
9/20/21, 1:26 PM
I think this story needs some more work on the tags. You want the people who are going to appreciate your story to read your story, it's not a great idea to surprise people with kinks. It was interesting and well-written, but it didn't feel like an age regression story. More like himboification, there's even some feminization in here. This is not a criticism of your story - it is a criticism of the tagging.