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9/16/21, 9:53 PM
Nice story. I loved it.

9/20/21, 12:05 PM
Thanks, @Jonanator

Jonanator
9/20/21, 12:07 PM
@BobbyBlobfish welcome. it was awesome. I hope to post today, so be on the lookout. Hope to see more Stories like this. I'm a huge fan of you.
9/16/21, 8:15 PM
First time rating on a GCS story, didn't know they have a romance rate instead of mind control. Love the story! πŸ’™πŸ’™πŸ’™πŸ’™ winder how they will continue they relationship? did mermans have their equivalent to human sex? πŸ€”

9/20/21, 12:04 PM
@Math_Reez πŸ’™ Now that I think about it, they were talking on whether or not they would have sex in that boat ending. At the time, I though a merman would have like a snake a retractable penis. Kelen would be a little weirded out but would have said to Aske that he could use his song to ease him at first. But now, I did my research. Most fishes have sexual organs under their bellies, but with a lot it grow during mating season. So maybe Aske would actually have something like that, but near where a penis is located. And during the reproduction, the female let her eggs fall into the sand (several thousands in one go!) while the male rub himself against the female, letting his sperms touches most of the eggs. So I guess during sex, Aske would humps against Kelen? But it would maybe feel sexual desire some parts of the year? Honestly, I tend to write relationships that are either sexual or romantic, weirdly enough. So I choose to not think too much about it, besides the "it would be weird, and Kelen would need to get used to it". One of the reason I had him think the relationship wouldn't necessarily works on the long term was actually the question of how they could have sex.
9/20/21, 9:05 AM
I love a good Big Sub story. Awesome stuff.
9/20/21, 6:47 AM
really like this so far good job i wonder if you're going to do anything for like sam alexander nova or maybe somebody like tim drake robin
Jul 9, 2019
9/20/21, 6:46 AM
Love the descriptions of the changes, sorry I didn't come across this earlier.
boi98229
9/20/21, 6:01 AM
i have not read anything like this so far on this site. Good story!
9/20/21, 3:43 AM
Glad to see you back again with another story. Enjoyed the mix of sexy and creepy in this one. Great job!

9/20/21, 5:26 AM
Thanks - this one took forever to write. Once I had 'who's the hottest of them all' in my head, I just kept rewriting it over and over until I found a plot I liked.
Anonymous
9/19/21, 10:54 PM
spectacular thanks!!

9/20/21, 5:25 AM
Thank you! ❀️
9/19/21, 10:42 PM
thank you for this new chapter, I hope to see more of this series

9/20/21, 5:24 AM
Thanks! I'm sure we'll see plenty more glimpses into the Rainbow Zone.
9/19/21, 9:43 PM
Always good to see a new DW story. This one didn’t disappoint. I like the Twilight Zone concept. It’s a great framing technique for unconnected slightly horror-ish stories. This one was hot up until the end, when it got horror-ish. Nice balance of hot and creepy.

9/20/21, 5:23 AM
Thanks! I love this framing, and not just cuz I think Rod Serling was a genius. Whenever I feel compelled to write something with a dark twist, this works as a great vehicle. It also lets me be a little more anvilicious with the moral of the story. Thanks for commenting – I think I've mentioned before, but your work really influenced how I pace my stories.