Recent Comments

Anonymous
9/19/21, 12:02 PM
Yes, by all means explore this some more :)
9/19/21, 12:00 PM
cant wait for the next chapter.
9/19/21, 11:27 AM
I really like where this is going, can't wait for the next chapter!
9/19/21, 10:24 AM
You should add the tag "picture". I think pictures are great in a story! It stimulates the imagination.
9/19/21, 7:20 AM
Great start! Loads of questions which us a great sign. Can't wait to see how the story develops.
nycboot
9/19/21, 6:44 AM
Intriguing start!
9/19/21, 4:36 AM
Awesome start! I look forward to more chapters.
9/19/21, 4:27 AM
interesting story. Hope to see where you take this.
Anonymous
9/19/21, 3:41 AM
i wouldn't blame you if you took a step back from some of your unfinished stories with all you have going on right now, but i wanted to give you a general kudos since you're fast becoming one of my favorite ever authors on the site! i feel like the last few times i've really enjoyed a premise and its execution, i'll check what the author's other work is and realize it's you again! so keep up the amazing work but don't forget to take care of yourself :-)

9/19/21, 4:13 AM
Oh wow, thanks! "Edits" is probably going to be the next story that I update, but I definitely haven't forgotten about this one! @
Anonymous
9/19/21, 3:36 AM
i was gonna wait until the whole thing was done to start this, but it looked too exciting and i couldn't help myself. and man, i'm glad i jumped in!! i think i just have too soft a spot for plot, really, especially slightly wild ones. and this story is doing a great job depicting a wishes-gone-wrong scenario that starts really ripping reality apart. there's a sort of worldbuilding through destruction that i really enjoy here. i also have a soft spot for sam's progression. he doesn't feel like a regular guy being thoughtless to me so much as like. somebody who's had so many compounding mental changes that continue to bump into each other that he's not really... capable of thinking things through so to speak. it's not an iq drain practically, but functionally that's what happens when you're extremely sexually keyed up all the time and haven't been able to adjust to fundamental changes to your psyche. and so it makes him more likely to rush into things which makes the whole situation worse. and if there's one thing i like in reality bending stories, it's Difficult Cycles To Work Your Way Out Of. I understand the other feedback and think they would also make for very interesting versions of this story, but personally I like where this is heading a lot. Really excited for part 2 of the chapter, and for the rest of the story in general!!!

9/19/21, 4:06 AM
Thanks! I think that's a really good explanation of how Sam's probably thinking (or failing to think). The next chapter will post sometime next week! @