Recent Comments

9/18/21, 11:35 PM
Wow, a truly zany chapter. I just keep getting thirstier and thirstier for when Marc finally gets Sam. Thanks for posting!

9/19/21, 1:30 AM
Thanks! Glad you're appreciating the zaniness! @tenser13
9/18/21, 10:25 PM
I'm really liking the story. I was skeptical at the first chapter since it at first seemed like there would be no rules to the magic mechanics. But I like how the two sort of organically placed their own rules. I liked this chapter, but it somewhat felt to me like it was missing a 'climax'. Meaning a scene for me to fixate on when finishing. I sort of thought we'd get a pole dancing show where Sam can't control his reactions to a room full of guys watching him. But maybe that is yet to come? I thought when Marc pulled his dick out, most of the suits were going to be straight men from outside the town, and end up all collapsing in orgasm from the show, allowing the group to run away. Of course, this would've also caused Sam to cum uncontrollably and have to be carried out by Marc or Gabe (causing him to cum more lol). But storm powers are cool too :)

9/19/21, 1:29 AM
Thanks! The chapter was a lot longer originally (like twice as long), but I wanted some breathing room for readers to process all the big plot reveals before diving into a big sex scene. The next installment will be soon! It's written, just needs some polish. @Dreamweavr
Anonymous
9/18/21, 9:28 PM
Is Sam's continued decreasing IQ the result of the bubble butt edit Gabe made several chapters ago or am i forgetting something? His drop in intelligence has become really prominent in the recent chapters. Makes for funny inner monologue and situations. Can't wait for the next issue.

9/19/21, 1:23 AM
Oh, his IQ isn't going down! There are just more and more sex-charged edits that are making him horny and distracted all the time (the bubble butt change is definitely a major culprit, although Sam doesn't mind it too much, obviously!). @
berlinstud
10/19/20, 10:07 PM
Blufman: So...So glad you're writing again. Bravo !!! Loved the story line plot. VERY CREATIVE. Keep up the writing.

7/22/21, 4:46 AM
thanks man. glad you like it. your stories are the tops are you planning g a y others ?@berlinstud

Anonymous
7/25/21, 11:50 PM
Bluffman: Just love your writing. Your stories really inspire & kickstart my own fantasies and imagination. Hope to start writing again soon. Have lots of ideas---Just need to get my butt in gear. Look forward to more of your own kink and fantasies. @Blufman1

berlinstud
7/26/21, 12:08 AM
Blufman: SORRY -- forgot to add my name to above reply @Blufman

7/26/21, 6:29 AM
@berlinstud

9/16/21, 5:21 AM
@berlinstud I would really like to chat with you at some point, get to know you better, get some ideas. I'm sure discussing stories would be one erotic

berlinstud
9/19/21, 12:45 AM
ALWAYS happy to chat with you about stories or whatever -- whenever you'd like. At: berlinstud007@yahoo.com @Blufman1
Anonymous
9/19/21, 12:40 AM
thanks. great ending scene
9/18/21, 10:31 PM
I always love reading your stories. I want to know how the dad will get the cuffs on himself. I'm hoping to see all the men in cuffs by the end.
9/18/21, 9:04 PM
This was hilarious and hot, as always. I love the questioning moments(it feels more believable). I've always said guys who have never bottomed or fingered themselves don't what they're missing, and this sexy farce proves that. I like the idea that after Brick and Castor come back to their senses, they'll likely be more open-minded sexually. The end with the police and intended victim getting into the hypnosis action was worthy of an award.

9/18/21, 10:20 PM
@Hew Mesmer Merci! I always hope his 'victims' undergo a permanent transformation for the better. And lol, I'm glad you liked the addition of the Rolex guy at the end. That was a last-second brainstorm. Thanks for your comment!
Anonymous
9/18/21, 9:24 PM
Great story,,,,can't wait for the next chapter
9/18/21, 9:05 PM
Oooo...very interesting. Can't wait for more.
9/18/21, 9:00 PM
Hot. Hope more is to come.