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9/18/21, 3:08 PM
that was intersting

9/18/21, 6:43 PM
Interesting good or bad 😅? Thank you for the read 😊 @darkblade2814

9/18/21, 7:07 PM
@ArdanWolfe to be honest, I have mixed feelings about this, CK had the right for some revenge, but as we don't know if they regreted what they did, so we don't know if it was a proportional retribution

9/18/21, 8:00 PM
Well that's where there was a bit of backfire on CK, and so he ended up developing romantic feelings for them. So the story was inspired by the Matthew Shepherd tragedy, it was the one event in my lifetime that really left a lasting mark on me. It was a "what if" scenario where twisted justice was given. And the wife beating mentioned at the beginning was to show Arnold was still abusive. Thank you for the feedback, and the read. ☺@darkblade2814

9/18/21, 8:04 PM
@ArdanWolfe I see, Arnold did deserve it but Desmond is a bit more ambigous

9/18/21, 8:10 PM
True. Honestly that's just me being poly, so I write a lot of stories with triads 😆@darkblade2814

9/18/21, 8:27 PM
@ArdanWolfe I understand it and enjoy it as well
9/18/21, 6:12 PM
This was awesome and sexy and hot. Love the events and the ending. It what totally a happy ending.

9/18/21, 6:53 PM
Thank you so much for the read and feedback. I always enjoy a good twisted ending. Glad you enjoyed 😊@Heru Kane

9/18/21, 7:18 PM
@ArdanWolfe Oh yeah, it was totally fun and sexy. I loved the comeuppance and the video presentation at the end. Them being in a three-person relationship was super sexy as well. The only thing that could have made it 'better' is if he found a way to convert the homophobic church into being good boys themselves. But yeah, this was sexy. I super enjoyed it. Also the dom top's pov was great.

9/18/21, 8:07 PM
Haha you're the second person to tell me the church needs to be brought in. Well maybe one day, though this really was a one and done story. I get very drained if I keep a series going for long, just feels like I'm forcing after a few chapters. But maybe it can get one sequel? Any way, glad you enjoyed. I always like to get feedback and know that my stories do have an interest to others. @Heru Kane
7/29/21, 9:07 PM
fantastic read! i think of dominic as an older keaton subjeck!

7/29/21, 10:32 PM
@Idudex oh damn that's way hotter than who i was picturing. I pictured him as a beefier version of the instagram model silvermodelkevin. But I like your guy better! Glad you enjoyed :)

9/5/21, 8:49 PM
@Idudex God, Keaton Subjek is the hottest wrestler to ever exist, I swear to god

Idudex
9/18/21, 7:08 PM
i pretty much worship him! @Ghostguy
9/18/21, 4:38 PM
I really kinda liked this story, I'm generally not one for hypnosis as it's just something that doesn't interest me, but this was an interesting take on that subject. Most writers hyptotize the innocent and bend them to their will to make them sex zombies for their own pleasure and we've seen that a **MILLION** times, enough so that it's pretty much expected. This is a different twist on that and I like that, even though they become sex zombies, that they kinda deserved it was a nice change. I thought the wife suddenly becoming lesbian was a little sudden and should have been introduced from the start alongside Arnold's changes. I would have like to have had the beating information introduced from the start. Perhaps have opened the story with CK living through that scene as a background for what is to come as it gives us his motivations up front. Other than those minor things, this is a really good read! Thanks!

9/18/21, 6:52 PM
As always, thank you so much for the feedback. Yeah I wanted the wife to become strong and I guess that doesn't necessarily mean she HAD to be a lesbian. Really it was meant to be CK's "fuck you" to the establishment that teaches that being gay is evil and should be destroyed. But yes, as she didn't make to many appearances it may not come across. And as for the story plot I always enjoy romance versus forced sexual dominance, and in a way even CK was punished because he developed feelings for the men he was manipulating. Glad you liked it and thank you again for all your insights 😊@Papa Werebear
Anonymous
9/18/21, 12:38 PM
I LOOOOOOOVE THIS! Very well written and the chronology of the narration DID take me for a really good ride.

9/18/21, 6:42 PM
Thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed 😊.
Buckyboi
9/18/21, 3:09 AM
Oh, so Charlie's there to help our protagonist be happy, since it seems like he changes when he's extremely unhappy. I know, I know, no questions will be spoiled in the comments. XD I had a thought last chapter of our hero taking Charlie for a walk while in dog form and suddenly poof! Naked twink on a leash in public. XD Interesting that that sort of happened, although not the way it had played out in my head. XD Charlie is such a good boy!

9/18/21, 11:27 AM
Close, but no cigar @Buckyboi! But I love that you're thinking about it. I had toyed with that idea, if I'm honest, but I think I might have something that feels like a nice way to explain everything... we'll see!

Buckyboi
9/18/21, 6:18 PM
@HunkLover Ah, well, at least I'm getting closer. XD
9/18/21, 5:40 PM
Well, I wish you luck and good writing but this story has gone so far from its original premise that its not fun anymore for me. The change to the two twinks and the super increase in some random foe and the utterly thoughtless edits has made the main character unlikable to me. So yeah, thumbs up, good luck, but this story is not what it was. Which is super sad as I loved the story at the start and eagerly awaited new additions.
9/18/21, 9:48 AM
This is very hot and very sweet. Simple, straight forward but incredibly well executed. I Iove the transformation and love how Ash ends up wanting it. And the sex is very nice.

9/18/21, 5:12 PM
@MonsterMash62 thank you! i really appreciate that. I don't usually write a ton of magical transformation but definitely had fun with this one!
9/18/21, 4:48 PM
Now this is the kind of stuff I come to GSS for. Playful, dirty, magical seduction with sex writing that takes its time to savor the hot details. Thanks for posting!
9/6/21, 6:08 PM
Wonderfully creative. So sweet and insightful on so many levels. Awesome story telling. So powerful that I felt lonely myself, pining for what they were able to have. If you can invoke that kind of emotion, you're a powerful storyteller!

9/18/21, 4:36 PM
@Stroppy Author If there's anything I love to do, whether fiction or non-fiction, it's to tell stories. I've often felt like I can't do that when also writing smut, but writing this and hearing that it had such an impact on you actually really energises me to keep doing the same (even with the incredibly smutty stories I'm planning to put out next...). I'm sorry you felt lonely, but I'm also warmed that it had that impact. Thanks for the high praise.