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9/18/21, 4:38 PM
I really kinda liked this story, I'm generally not one for hypnosis as it's just something that doesn't interest me, but this was an interesting take on that subject. Most writers hyptotize the innocent and bend them to their will to make them sex zombies for their own pleasure and we've seen that a **MILLION** times, enough so that it's pretty much expected. This is a different twist on that and I like that, even though they become sex zombies, that they kinda deserved it was a nice change. I thought the wife suddenly becoming lesbian was a little sudden and should have been introduced from the start alongside Arnold's changes. I would have like to have had the beating information introduced from the start. Perhaps have opened the story with CK living through that scene as a background for what is to come as it gives us his motivations up front. Other than those minor things, this is a really good read! Thanks!

9/18/21, 6:52 PM
As always, thank you so much for the feedback. Yeah I wanted the wife to become strong and I guess that doesn't necessarily mean she HAD to be a lesbian. Really it was meant to be CK's "fuck you" to the establishment that teaches that being gay is evil and should be destroyed. But yes, as she didn't make to many appearances it may not come across. And as for the story plot I always enjoy romance versus forced sexual dominance, and in a way even CK was punished because he developed feelings for the men he was manipulating. Glad you liked it and thank you again for all your insights 😊@Papa Werebear
Anonymous
9/18/21, 12:38 PM
I LOOOOOOOVE THIS! Very well written and the chronology of the narration DID take me for a really good ride.

9/18/21, 6:42 PM
Thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed 😊.
Buckyboi
9/18/21, 3:09 AM
Oh, so Charlie's there to help our protagonist be happy, since it seems like he changes when he's extremely unhappy. I know, I know, no questions will be spoiled in the comments. XD I had a thought last chapter of our hero taking Charlie for a walk while in dog form and suddenly poof! Naked twink on a leash in public. XD Interesting that that sort of happened, although not the way it had played out in my head. XD Charlie is such a good boy!

9/18/21, 11:27 AM
Close, but no cigar @Buckyboi! But I love that you're thinking about it. I had toyed with that idea, if I'm honest, but I think I might have something that feels like a nice way to explain everything... we'll see!

Buckyboi
9/18/21, 6:18 PM
@HunkLover Ah, well, at least I'm getting closer. XD
9/18/21, 5:40 PM
Well, I wish you luck and good writing but this story has gone so far from its original premise that its not fun anymore for me. The change to the two twinks and the super increase in some random foe and the utterly thoughtless edits has made the main character unlikable to me. So yeah, thumbs up, good luck, but this story is not what it was. Which is super sad as I loved the story at the start and eagerly awaited new additions.
9/18/21, 9:48 AM
This is very hot and very sweet. Simple, straight forward but incredibly well executed. I Iove the transformation and love how Ash ends up wanting it. And the sex is very nice.

9/18/21, 5:12 PM
@MonsterMash62 thank you! i really appreciate that. I don't usually write a ton of magical transformation but definitely had fun with this one!
9/18/21, 4:48 PM
Now this is the kind of stuff I come to GSS for. Playful, dirty, magical seduction with sex writing that takes its time to savor the hot details. Thanks for posting!
9/6/21, 6:08 PM
Wonderfully creative. So sweet and insightful on so many levels. Awesome story telling. So powerful that I felt lonely myself, pining for what they were able to have. If you can invoke that kind of emotion, you're a powerful storyteller!

9/18/21, 4:36 PM
@Stroppy Author If there's anything I love to do, whether fiction or non-fiction, it's to tell stories. I've often felt like I can't do that when also writing smut, but writing this and hearing that it had such an impact on you actually really energises me to keep doing the same (even with the incredibly smutty stories I'm planning to put out next...). I'm sorry you felt lonely, but I'm also warmed that it had that impact. Thanks for the high praise.
Daniel
9/18/21, 4:23 PM
solid set up dude. Hopefully the punishments will fit the crimes. I really enjoy the corruption factor that revenge can contain, don't make it easy on these guys I.J.S.
Anonymous
9/18/21, 3:20 PM
so glad to see you back! short chapter, i hope the next ones start to take the story a bit further. it would have been good to elaborate on his past relationships, like his friend, to really sense the loss and betrayal he felt later on. I'd like to see more humiliation
Island Jock
9/18/21, 3:16 PM
Absolute great writing! Really interesting and different story line. Hope it keeps going.