Recent Comments

9/18/21, 3:04 PM
Super hot! I'm a big fan of the playful rebellion against the demon; that first chapter was enough tragedy and horror to last me a couple installations haha. Really liked the way you wrote the sex with Omar and Preston too. Can't wait to see Aiden get farther with both of them! Thanks for posting.
9/18/21, 2:57 PM
Good to read the next chapter, thank you. And plenty of potential. Markie has plenty of ways of earning a living. :)
9/18/21, 3:45 AM
hot. love the story.

9/18/21, 12:12 PM
@Jonanator Thanks aha. i wrote it drunk so the pacing is weirdly fast and theres probably grammar mistakes

9/18/21, 12:49 PM
@burntoutmilk if you wrote this drunk and it still came out practically good, I'm not only impressed, but you just earned yourself a new fan of your writing, my friend

9/18/21, 12:59 PM
@Jonanator lmao thanks

9/18/21, 2:14 PM
@burntoutmilk welcome. honestly, had you not said you did if when you were drunk, I wouldn't have noticed it. I'd love to talk more, you seem to have great ideas and great writing

9/18/21, 2:36 PM
@Jonanator if you ever have a cool idea, just leave a comment or something as I am so bad at coming up with like a base idea :)

9/18/21, 2:38 PM
@burntoutmilk sure, no problem. I look forward to seeing more of your work 🙂
9/17/21, 11:50 PM
an interesting....and welcome change from the cyber role reversal. very hot though!! think this one could use a sequel or else more in person mindfuck stories between "doms" and real alphas cant wait for the next one Cracker!!

Cracker
9/18/21, 8:51 AM
Thanks, i wanted to mix it up a bit from my usual story hunting ground@Mr Jack Off

9/18/21, 2:35 PM
@Cracker Id say this new direction is worth exploring. would love one with a Cocky alpha coach .... or a hotshot young cop. your stories always get me revved so keep em
Anonymous
9/18/21, 1:31 PM
So far, so good!!!!!
Anonymous
9/18/21, 12:52 PM
Great story. Would love to see the PREQUEL first to get some background on how Mr. Garfield and Nick met and how the former became the latter's master.
9/18/21, 7:42 AM
Great chapter!

9/18/21, 12:12 PM
@Norismo Thanks!
Jack
9/18/21, 9:29 AM
Oh, my heart broke at the end. You already know this is a good story, Author, but let me just tell you that I am feeling things I wasn't expecting to feel.

9/18/21, 11:30 AM
@Jack, I'm genuinely surprised by the comments and reactions this story has had so far... I really just did not expect it. So I'm very happy to know you're enjoying it, and I sincerely hope you love where it goes.
9/18/21, 11:26 AM
Super hot! Love the reality change aspect of it...