Recent Comments

Anonymous
9/18/21, 3:20 PM
so glad to see you back! short chapter, i hope the next ones start to take the story a bit further. it would have been good to elaborate on his past relationships, like his friend, to really sense the loss and betrayal he felt later on. I'd like to see more humiliation
Island Jock
9/18/21, 3:16 PM
Absolute great writing! Really interesting and different story line. Hope it keeps going.
9/17/21, 3:57 PM
Nice one! Always happy to read a story involving some nice serious foot fetish fun. Would be fun to see Tyler staying oblivious in his feet and dick smoking addiction, but your ending was a more sustainable happy ending for both of them so it's all good as well. Good work!

9/18/21, 12:14 PM
@tomozco Thank you! This means a lot to me as I really love your gentlemen's club series!!! (You so have to make another chapter <3)

9/18/21, 3:14 PM
@burntoutmilk Cheers! It's always nice see new people coming up with new ideas, so keep up your good work! I'm still working on that series, but it's taking a bit of time to put my thoughts together...so stay tuned. Thanks for liking it!
9/18/21, 3:04 PM
Super hot! I'm a big fan of the playful rebellion against the demon; that first chapter was enough tragedy and horror to last me a couple installations haha. Really liked the way you wrote the sex with Omar and Preston too. Can't wait to see Aiden get farther with both of them! Thanks for posting.
9/18/21, 2:57 PM
Good to read the next chapter, thank you. And plenty of potential. Markie has plenty of ways of earning a living. :)
9/18/21, 3:45 AM
hot. love the story.

9/18/21, 12:12 PM
@Jonanator Thanks aha. i wrote it drunk so the pacing is weirdly fast and theres probably grammar mistakes

9/18/21, 12:49 PM
@burntoutmilk if you wrote this drunk and it still came out practically good, I'm not only impressed, but you just earned yourself a new fan of your writing, my friend

9/18/21, 12:59 PM
@Jonanator lmao thanks

9/18/21, 2:14 PM
@burntoutmilk welcome. honestly, had you not said you did if when you were drunk, I wouldn't have noticed it. I'd love to talk more, you seem to have great ideas and great writing

9/18/21, 2:36 PM
@Jonanator if you ever have a cool idea, just leave a comment or something as I am so bad at coming up with like a base idea :)

9/18/21, 2:38 PM
@burntoutmilk sure, no problem. I look forward to seeing more of your work 🙂
9/17/21, 11:50 PM
an interesting....and welcome change from the cyber role reversal. very hot though!! think this one could use a sequel or else more in person mindfuck stories between "doms" and real alphas cant wait for the next one Cracker!!

Cracker
9/18/21, 8:51 AM
Thanks, i wanted to mix it up a bit from my usual story hunting ground@Mr Jack Off

9/18/21, 2:35 PM
@Cracker Id say this new direction is worth exploring. would love one with a Cocky alpha coach .... or a hotshot young cop. your stories always get me revved so keep em
Anonymous
9/18/21, 1:31 PM
So far, so good!!!!!
Anonymous
9/18/21, 12:52 PM
Great story. Would love to see the PREQUEL first to get some background on how Mr. Garfield and Nick met and how the former became the latter's master.