Recent Comments

Jack
9/18/21, 9:29 AM
Oh, my heart broke at the end. You already know this is a good story, Author, but let me just tell you that I am feeling things I wasn't expecting to feel.

9/18/21, 11:30 AM
@Jack, I'm genuinely surprised by the comments and reactions this story has had so far... I really just did not expect it. So I'm very happy to know you're enjoying it, and I sincerely hope you love where it goes.
9/18/21, 11:26 AM
Super hot! Love the reality change aspect of it...
9/18/21, 11:22 AM
Keep going! Loved what I read so far!
9/18/21, 10:20 AM
is this the end of the series?
9/14/21, 11:38 PM
i wonder what the possible effects of eli having heard Erik's trigger phrase might be? sure he has only heard it once, and he has no idea what it could do, but what kinds of trouble could a smart, vindictive, jealous, middle sibling do with his elder brother's trigger before Vince finds out? just a thought.

Blackjinx123
9/18/21, 2:06 AM
@Mind Labyrinth, what a great thought that is! I'll say this definitely got the creative juices flowing ;)

9/18/21, 8:55 AM
@Blackjinx123 *Squealing and clapping* What a wonderful thing to hear that i inspired such a talented storyteller!
Sexcrab
9/18/21, 5:19 AM
For present tags, I expected it to have a classic mind control/reprogram story, with "Master" Mark being hypnotized and induced to become the protagonist's southern fuck toy. But I was not disappointed, on the contrary. I'm just sorry it won't be part 2.

Cracker
9/18/21, 8:50 AM
i never day never and glad you liked it@Sexcrab
9/18/21, 7:54 AM
Hey, it's a great idea and I'm looking forward to reading more, I can't wait to hear how Ryan deals with his changes
9/18/21, 7:32 AM
I'm literally aching for the next chapter :) (jokingly, not trying to rush you)
9/18/21, 6:46 AM
That was so hot! I'd love to be one of The Enslavers' cumsluts
9/18/21, 5:55 AM
Love it so far. Thanks for posting.