Recent Comments

9/17/21, 11:50 PM
an interesting....and welcome change from the cyber role reversal. very hot though!! think this one could use a sequel or else more in person mindfuck stories between "doms" and real alphas cant wait for the next one Cracker!!

Cracker
9/18/21, 8:51 AM
Thanks, i wanted to mix it up a bit from my usual story hunting ground@Mr Jack Off

9/18/21, 2:35 PM
@Cracker Id say this new direction is worth exploring. would love one with a Cocky alpha coach .... or a hotshot young cop. your stories always get me revved so keep em
Anonymous
9/18/21, 1:31 PM
So far, so good!!!!!
Anonymous
9/18/21, 12:52 PM
Great story. Would love to see the PREQUEL first to get some background on how Mr. Garfield and Nick met and how the former became the latter's master.
9/18/21, 7:42 AM
Great chapter!

9/18/21, 12:12 PM
@Norismo Thanks!
Jack
9/18/21, 9:29 AM
Oh, my heart broke at the end. You already know this is a good story, Author, but let me just tell you that I am feeling things I wasn't expecting to feel.

9/18/21, 11:30 AM
@Jack, I'm genuinely surprised by the comments and reactions this story has had so far... I really just did not expect it. So I'm very happy to know you're enjoying it, and I sincerely hope you love where it goes.
9/18/21, 11:26 AM
Super hot! Love the reality change aspect of it...
9/18/21, 11:22 AM
Keep going! Loved what I read so far!
9/18/21, 10:20 AM
is this the end of the series?
9/14/21, 11:38 PM
i wonder what the possible effects of eli having heard Erik's trigger phrase might be? sure he has only heard it once, and he has no idea what it could do, but what kinds of trouble could a smart, vindictive, jealous, middle sibling do with his elder brother's trigger before Vince finds out? just a thought.

Blackjinx123
9/18/21, 2:06 AM
@Mind Labyrinth, what a great thought that is! I'll say this definitely got the creative juices flowing ;)

9/18/21, 8:55 AM
@Blackjinx123 *Squealing and clapping* What a wonderful thing to hear that i inspired such a talented storyteller!