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9/17/21, 9:17 PM
I’m loving this—the subtle bittersweetness of Charlie transforming back and forth, the little bits of foreshadowing you scatter around, the sex—actually, I wanted to mention, I love how much precum he was leaking; please don’t drop that in future chapters, because it was hot as fuck.

9/17/21, 9:58 PM
Well, thank you very much, @Soren Fitz! I agree, I think it is quite a bittersweet relationship the two of them have... how can you have a relationship with someone who can't control if or when they'll actually be there? More precum coming your way!
nycboot
9/17/21, 7:06 PM
I guess it's the fate of readers that you want to shout at the protagonist "Just ask him what's going on!" but of course that's too easy. I like that you incorporated the idea that dogs are mostly colorblind.

9/17/21, 9:56 PM
I mean... he did @nycboot! You can't expect a straight answer from a gay dog! I've tried to throw in a few little bits here and there where I can, just to keep it interesting!
Anonymous
9/17/21, 5:17 PM
Well, Im glad they had the time to finish the blowjob at least. It couldve gotten... hairy

9/17/21, 5:57 PM
Ay, chihuahua! That would've been unpleasant.
9/16/21, 9:16 PM
Hot story. I'm loving your work. Keep it up, please.

9/17/21, 10:10 AM
@Jonanator Thank you <3 I love knowing people enjoy my stories

9/17/21, 10:40 AM
@burntoutmilk yeah, each story you do gets hotter and hotter. keep it up.

9/17/21, 10:47 AM
@Jonanator Yes sir. I will keep it up ;)
9/16/21, 7:46 PM
Mmmmmm any story with musk is one for me

9/17/21, 10:10 AM
@GiveInToTheMusk Hehehe isn't musk just so delicious?
9/17/21, 6:20 AM
This is definitely one of my favorite stories on here. Love that the guy was brainwashed to unknowingly be addicted to feet smell :)

9/17/21, 10:10 AM
@hypnofeet3 Wow thank you! Glad you enjoyed :) I'm always looking for new hypnosis ideas with feet so I'll keep em coming
9/17/21, 9:55 AM
this is BY FAR !! one of the greatest stories i have EVER READ in my opinion!!! it had everything ive ever wanted and more! Tickling, edging, cbt, chastity, humiliation, pegging, stripping/forced nudity and the use of bengay and itching powder which are soooo underrated. Reading this story felt like my own personal Heaven, it was absolutely terrific and has never before been done by any other author for me. Thank you so much for creating this wonderful and creative story, the detachment was utterly genius and beautiful. The justice served to the poor victims was satisfying, the change in the hot frat jerks and their well deserved punishments was delicious, and the potential arch between Wynne and Parker was the cherry on top. I would say my only nitpick with this story is that I wish there was more lol! I was so sad when I finished it, not ready to accept it was over, but it was amazing. I do also honestly believe this story could even be expanded upon, like maybe a "reboot" of sorts, or an expansion, that further dives into the details and agony of each boy's torture, prolonging it and then even maybe furthering past the original ending. If this could happen I would truly be in Heaven, thank you again for this wonderful story!
9/17/21, 9:36 AM
wishing for a part 4! I'd love to look like Edward myself!
9/17/21, 9:27 AM
FANTASTIC,MARVELOUS !!! Lucky boy.I would like more humiliations with the smell of the feet.I hope that you can continue this
9/17/21, 6:53 AM
I read the first part ages ago and I missed this - I'm really glad I found it though. This chapter was interesting, VERY hot, and made me so eager for more. Amazing work - now on to part 3!