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El observador
10/25/20, 6:09 AM
This "route" so to speak is one of my favorites, if the guy's personality was permanently deleted maybe I should take the opportunity to create a new one completely, but please continue with this

9/17/21, 3:02 AM
@El observador - just realize my answer wasn't a reply, so maybe you never get a notification. If you have an idea of what you want to happen in this path, I hope you write something and add a chapter here. (Y si el ingles es un problema, te podia apoyar en lo que pueda.)
9/17/21, 2:41 AM
I am so glad you are back. I hope we can see Mark back in panties soon with him forced to be smooth like a fem.
1/2/21, 3:25 AM
i really hope this isn't done forever

9/17/21, 2:33 AM
@Xyze guess who's back. ;)
9/17/21, 12:17 AM
Fucking outstanding. I'm completely in love with this character. And such hilarious execution -- "Ethan, being a moron..." I was cackling. And god, just fantastically hot. Love this series!

9/17/21, 1:42 AM
Thanks, @Razz TFs! This chapter has been a looong time coming, so I'm glad it tickled your funny bone. And your other bone. Cheers!
9/16/21, 9:46 PM
Great story, very well written. Personally I'd want Austins tf for myself. The most upsetting to me was Bills. To lose the ability to communicate terrifies me. Also not so keen on going back to an infants sized cock! I'd love to read about another group of guys and what their tfs would be. Thanks for sharing
JRL
9/16/21, 8:29 PM
one of the hottest stories that i've read in a long time. thank you for making this a series :)
Sep 15, 2021
Martin
9/16/21, 8:19 PM
Very cute, really well written and it got me hard! So mission accomplished!
9/16/21, 8:09 PM
really enjoying this one,
Rubber_Lover14
9/15/21, 10:25 PM
This is amazingly kinky. I love the feet licking, the brainwashing, the armpits, the musk. All of it! Would be super cool to see a sequel or a spin off series. This could easily become one of the kinkiest story series on here. Just wish it was longer. But ik how hard it is to write, so im not complaining about what we're given. Its amazing really. Cant wait to see what u write next

9/16/21, 9:27 AM
@Rubber_Lover14 Thank u so much that means a lot <3 yeah it is hard to write cos i start writing and then get to the kinky stuff way too fast and idk where the room for growth is lmao. I would like to write a sequel or something but i'm just struggling with any cool inspiration at the moment

Rubber_Lover14
9/16/21, 11:56 AM
@burntoutmilk you could always do a spin off, like a foot massage place or something. Or a story about what he does with them after work. After all, im sure tommy is too dumb to live on his own. He could always go stay with his daddy. Or perhaps a time skip where the dentist has become rather wealthy, and now uses his hypnosis to build himself a harem of loyal slutty servants. Or tommy becomes obsessed with the feeling of latex against him, cause of the latex gloves, so hes slowly turned into a loyal empty headed drone by Dr Daddy. Or Tommy breaks free from his training and tries to get away (but fails obviously. Or maybe he comes back on his own, desperate to have Dr Daddy back). Really it just depends on what your favorite kinks are and then build the story around those As for getting to the kinky stuff quickly, how about setting yourself a minimum word count you have to get into the general area of before getting into the kinky stuff? That might be helpful, although im not a writer so i may not be helpful in that regard

9/16/21, 1:58 PM
@Rubber_Lover14 Thank you so much! These ideas r super helpful i'll definitely take them on board <3 I'll probably write a few different stories for now and return to this at a later date. Thank you!!!!

Rubber_Lover14
9/16/21, 8:07 PM
@burntoutmilk cool. Can't wait to see what kinky story you come up with next
Anonymous
9/16/21, 7:45 PM
very hot!