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Anonymous
12/8/23, 8:51 AM
Oh man, I just realized I forgot to comment on how much I love the rubber cop squad! How could I let this happen?! Oh, right...I think I was trying to chime in on the discussion about heroes and villains winning and losing, but every time I started writing something it kept turning into a rambling discourse on the human condition(don't you just *hate* when that happens?). Anyway, yeah. I love drones, and I love men in uniform -- what could be better than drones in uniform? :heart_eyes: I especially love that they're *completely* covered, so the sunglass visors are literally their "eyes." And the badges! Be still my beating cock! I'd find it hard not to immediately commit a crime if I ran into them on the street! I guess I'm not a huge fan of the speaker mouths, but nobody's perfect. As for their boss, I'm not a fan of him at *all*, but as Officer 4 so astutely put it, *who* they serve isn't really a huge factor in the end(and if my guess is right, it won't even be an issue soon anyway). Overall, an exquisite conversion. I was already looking forward to seeing more of them, but you really knocked it out of the park. Can't wait to see what they get up to! Regarding how I think the chips should fall in the end, I'll try to limit myself just to commenting on how interesting it is that the so-called "heroes" and "villains" have begun to resemble each other so closely(looking at Burgundy and Tri-Hard in particular); it's almost like subscribing to those labels in the first place traps you and restricts your thinking :thinking:. I know you've played with philosophical concepts a bit in the past, so I'll leave you with a quote from one of my favorite thinkers: "What is done out of love always takes place beyond good and evil.”

12/8/23, 9:22 AM
@Anonymous Ah, yes,... Philosophy. It's a very _Nietzsche_ subject,... ha ha ha! Forgive me; we all have our weaknesses. I'm glad you liked the cop-drones! They get a bit of a focus in the next chapter as team **Tri-Hard** begins to escalate things on their end. Again, I'm going to skirt around the subject of 'blurred lines' and what constitutes a 'hero' and a 'villain' in regards to where the story is going,... but I will say a 'Hero' is no less flawed than anyone else; they simply make for a more beautiful disaster when those flaws are exposed and exploited!

Niko
2/26/25, 11:41 AM
@Anonymous "the chips should fall in the end" Ah, yes... Let's enlist the Californian Highway Patrol Squad's hunks as well! :grin:
2/26/25, 9:13 AM
The be careful what u wished for for. Nice
2/26/25, 6:18 AM
This is an AMAZING story. The classic inductions are phenomenal (that’s what got me hooked on hypnosis in the first place), the foot focus is well-balanced, and the writing and characterization has the perfect blend of development without distracting from the sexiness. Thanks for an incredible cruise. :)

2/26/25, 7:49 AM
@[Feed Your Head](/user/show/1170832) Thank you for joining us! We hope you enjoyed your stay. See you again soon ;)
2/26/25, 6:07 AM
I hope more prescriptions are given out by the doctor.
Anonymous
11/2/23, 1:21 AM
Duuude, I thought for sure this was gonna be the big exposition dump chapter, you're blueballing me here! (Yes I'm a sicko who gets off to PLOT and CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT, don't kinkshame me). Also I hope I'm just reading into things too much, but if those "humanity" references in Freedog's conversion were supposed to be a dig against my comment from a couple chapters ago, we might need to have words

11/2/23, 5:36 PM
@Anonymous Don't worry; they weren't. **Freedom's** idea of his 'humanity' became a scapegoat as he 'fought' the brain drain. He sacrificed it in order to absolve himself of giving in and enjoying what was being done to him. Sure, he was pushed towards that very conclusion by Hank's words, but it was a welcome escape he was more than happy to dive into!

Anonymous
11/3/23, 9:26 AM
@[Blazargus](/user/show/10012784) Would you say that you deliberately set up Carl as a mirror/foil to Henry? I'm reminded of an image from several chapters back where Henry saw himself as "split" into Duty Boy and Super Bitch(to me, representing his heroic and civilian halves, respectively). It seems like the key divergence between Henry and Carl is that Henry chose his humanity, whereas Carl chose "duty." The thing that *really* gets me going is the ironic outcomes of their decisions: in dogmatically refusing to give up his ideals, Carl actually ends up turning into a complete subversion of everything he stood for(the part where, even having accepted his slave status, he continues to try and rationalize Tri-Hard as the righteous Master and Nick just some demented pervert was especially twisted/fun). Meanwhile, Henry, who used his "enslavement" as an excuse to destroy his heroic image and vent his repressed frustration, is actually in a much better position to do something good with his powers, if he chooses to. And I hope he does! Seeing his heroic instincts kick in when he saw his Mas -- I mean boyf -- I mean Owner in trouble gave me warm fuzzies; I think part of him really does want to help people, but it just got all twisted up because of the constant pressure from his dad. He needed to throw that off temporarily to heal, but I think Henry will only be truly "complete" when his two halves are reunited under one purpose.

11/3/23, 1:03 PM
@Anonymous To answer your question; yes. The pair are both opposites and the same. I'm very happy to see how deeply you've analyzed all of this!

11/8/23, 2:27 AM
@[Blazargus](/user/show/10012784) But also to what extent will Mom have in that decision making? She is about to take a larger role as she steps into the limelight. She clearly understood the more underlining 'tendencies' of her husband. And therefore how that would likely repeat in her son. Henry has the potential to still be a hero. Maybe a rubber hero? He has some decisions to make. And so does Nick in conjunction with both Mom and Henry. And I am curious if his developing interest in rubber is more personal or something he wants for Henry? A lot of big choices laying ahead while dealing with Tri-Hard.

11/8/23, 5:34 PM
@[Marik29](/user/show/10021139) There are definitely many choices coming up for our heroes. There's more of Sarah and the boys in the next chapter, but there's a bigger focus on someone else,... (Apologies to all for the slower than normal progress, my health is always bad around this time of year.)

Niko
2/26/25, 2:03 AM
@Anonymous Funny how you describe Carl refusing to give up his ideals as 'DOGmatically'... :wink:

2/26/25, 2:20 AM
@[Niko](/user/show/992975) -_- Now I know how other people feel when I do this to them,... _Thanks!_ :p

Anonymous
2/26/25, 5:19 AM
@[Niko](/user/show/992975) Yeah that was intentional lol Unfortunately I fell out of love with this series after the sequel was released, in particular after a comment made a couple months ago. It's such a shame; I really liked Henry and Nick's dynamic.
2/26/25, 4:33 AM
Great start!
Silas
2/26/25, 4:27 AM
Very hot. Hope you keep continuing this. Very well written too!
2/26/25, 4:24 AM
Goddamn I need the next chapter!!! So good
Feb 25, 2025
2/26/25, 3:43 AM
This was a slow burn but I’m so glad I stuck with it. Great stuff. I’d love if you leaned more into the physical description of this new body, and how each guy feels about sharing these new parts with his best bros
Niko
2/26/25, 2:57 AM
Why raid the gym when you still have 12 guys left you captured to experiment on, including poor Lee, who we've not heard from for a while now...?

2/26/25, 3:42 AM
@[Niko](/user/show/992975) When was 12 guys ever enough for anyone,..? ;) As for Lee, he hasn't gone far. A few more chapters and you'll see him again!