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9/15/21, 11:16 AM
Okay, there is a lot of reaction that seems a lot more... I guess logic is the word? Given the situation and what's happening. That does open the question of what? Jae is a figurehead now? The political power he holds or not is just confusing me now. I presume he has more limited power than we though... Okay. The small errors are here and there, nothing terrible. Lots of missing -s, some your/you/you're. Happen to everyone. But what does "on this walk" even means? Is that an expression? The couple... I like the fact they add a little feud over Dylan being too fast before quickly mending. That's something I feel happen to a lot of couples. Zane saying that Dylan has claim to him, in a way, that raised my eyebrow a little, but it's fine. I can imagine why he would think that way. Show that he actually don't mind the possessiveness. Differentiate him from Kai in the first story. A bit cute, thinking about it.

Jonanator
9/15/21, 11:21 AM
@BobbyBlobfish glad you like it so far. I'll post the next one later.
9/15/21, 10:53 AM
hot story. really, liked it. keep it up.
Anonymous
9/15/21, 10:53 AM
Hope see him totally succumb and lose control
9/14/21, 2:25 AM
This a hot story. please do a sequel.

9/15/21, 9:30 AM
@Jonanator Thank you!!! Probably won't do a sequel for these specific characters but in the future i'm definitely writing a more extensive barefoot hypnosis story. It's probably my favourite topic and I just wrote out a short story as I was in the mood.

9/15/21, 10:38 AM
@burntoutmilk no problem. can't wait for more
9/15/21, 10:21 AM
Hugely impressive. I love the pacing and that Dan is complicit and clearly enjoys his enslavement. Now that Dan's been fully processed perhaps he can be used as bait to lure other alpha Daddies into Thomas' barber shop, perhaps they are other contractors (plumbers, electricians etc) or the wealthy bankers, lawyers and estate agents that employ the services of JM Construction. Keep up the good work!
StatueLover
9/13/21, 9:32 PM
Please continue this . . . it's great!

9/15/21, 9:30 AM
@StatueLover I'll definitely write similar stuff in the future :)
9/14/21, 1:05 AM
This is great! I really like the dumber aspect and the musk smell, great job!

9/15/21, 9:30 AM
@Chikara Thank you <3 the feedback keeps me going
9/15/21, 9:21 AM
Is just me or wouldn't his sore tooth hurt if trying to give a blow job. I mean the doctor didn't really fix anything yet. Other than that I enjoyed the story.

9/15/21, 9:28 AM
@Spicey ahaha sometimes I just start writing and forgot what I wrote. Glad you enjoyed it!
9/14/21, 8:17 PM
Loved it! And I think this one has all kinds of possibilities for a sequel... maybe Tommy's dad needs a new dentist?

9/15/21, 9:27 AM
@Hypnothrill maybe maybe... I'm always looking for ideas for new stories :)
9/14/21, 9:58 PM
OK, I may or may not have a very specific fantasy about my bearish dilf of a dentist and that may or may not have made me love this story beyond reason but I'll never tell. (I hope the Dr. Daddy eventually looked after Tommy's tooth though!)

9/15/21, 9:27 AM
@amul I'm glad you enjoyed it! I'd like to think his tooth was probably fixed afterwards anyways.