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9/15/21, 12:17 AM
A dog to young man...that is the opposite of where it usually goes. Intriguing. I look forward to reading on. Woof! (and interesting that this is the first story I read with the new "Romance" ranking category. I laughed thinking how it's the first time and I'm rating a dog story. But thinking of the several tender moments you made between the character and the dog, resulted in a high ranking for the romance category.

9/15/21, 2:42 PM
Well @PupScout, I won't pretend it's a totally new concept, but yeah - a twist on an old classic. I'm trying to reach a balance of fantasy and reality in this story... if such a thing were to happen to the average bloke on the street, how would you handle it? Especially if the person your pet turns into turns you on. I'm not 100% sure where I'm going, but it's gonna be fun to find out. Thank you so much for your ratings, I genuinely appreciate them!
9/15/21, 2:11 PM
This has been adorable! Big fan.

9/15/21, 2:37 PM
Thank you so much, @GiveInToTheMusk ! Glad you're enjoying it.
9/15/21, 2:00 PM
good to see another rubber drone story on here, enjoyed it
9/15/21, 11:16 AM
Okay, there is a lot of reaction that seems a lot more... I guess logic is the word? Given the situation and what's happening. That does open the question of what? Jae is a figurehead now? The political power he holds or not is just confusing me now. I presume he has more limited power than we though... Okay. The small errors are here and there, nothing terrible. Lots of missing -s, some your/you/you're. Happen to everyone. But what does "on this walk" even means? Is that an expression? The couple... I like the fact they add a little feud over Dylan being too fast before quickly mending. That's something I feel happen to a lot of couples. Zane saying that Dylan has claim to him, in a way, that raised my eyebrow a little, but it's fine. I can imagine why he would think that way. Show that he actually don't mind the possessiveness. Differentiate him from Kai in the first story. A bit cute, thinking about it.

Jonanator
9/15/21, 11:21 AM
@BobbyBlobfish glad you like it so far. I'll post the next one later.
9/15/21, 10:53 AM
hot story. really, liked it. keep it up.
Anonymous
9/15/21, 10:53 AM
Hope see him totally succumb and lose control
9/14/21, 2:25 AM
This a hot story. please do a sequel.

9/15/21, 9:30 AM
@Jonanator Thank you!!! Probably won't do a sequel for these specific characters but in the future i'm definitely writing a more extensive barefoot hypnosis story. It's probably my favourite topic and I just wrote out a short story as I was in the mood.

9/15/21, 10:38 AM
@burntoutmilk no problem. can't wait for more
9/15/21, 10:21 AM
Hugely impressive. I love the pacing and that Dan is complicit and clearly enjoys his enslavement. Now that Dan's been fully processed perhaps he can be used as bait to lure other alpha Daddies into Thomas' barber shop, perhaps they are other contractors (plumbers, electricians etc) or the wealthy bankers, lawyers and estate agents that employ the services of JM Construction. Keep up the good work!
StatueLover
9/13/21, 9:32 PM
Please continue this . . . it's great!

9/15/21, 9:30 AM
@StatueLover I'll definitely write similar stuff in the future :)
9/14/21, 1:05 AM
This is great! I really like the dumber aspect and the musk smell, great job!

9/15/21, 9:30 AM
@Chikara Thank you <3 the feedback keeps me going