Recent Comments

9/15/21, 10:21 AM
Hugely impressive. I love the pacing and that Dan is complicit and clearly enjoys his enslavement. Now that Dan's been fully processed perhaps he can be used as bait to lure other alpha Daddies into Thomas' barber shop, perhaps they are other contractors (plumbers, electricians etc) or the wealthy bankers, lawyers and estate agents that employ the services of JM Construction. Keep up the good work!
StatueLover
9/13/21, 9:32 PM
Please continue this . . . it's great!

9/15/21, 9:30 AM
@StatueLover I'll definitely write similar stuff in the future :)
9/14/21, 1:05 AM
This is great! I really like the dumber aspect and the musk smell, great job!

9/15/21, 9:30 AM
@Chikara Thank you <3 the feedback keeps me going
9/15/21, 9:21 AM
Is just me or wouldn't his sore tooth hurt if trying to give a blow job. I mean the doctor didn't really fix anything yet. Other than that I enjoyed the story.

9/15/21, 9:28 AM
@Spicey ahaha sometimes I just start writing and forgot what I wrote. Glad you enjoyed it!
9/14/21, 8:17 PM
Loved it! And I think this one has all kinds of possibilities for a sequel... maybe Tommy's dad needs a new dentist?

9/15/21, 9:27 AM
@Hypnothrill maybe maybe... I'm always looking for ideas for new stories :)
9/14/21, 9:58 PM
OK, I may or may not have a very specific fantasy about my bearish dilf of a dentist and that may or may not have made me love this story beyond reason but I'll never tell. (I hope the Dr. Daddy eventually looked after Tommy's tooth though!)

9/15/21, 9:27 AM
@amul I'm glad you enjoyed it! I'd like to think his tooth was probably fixed afterwards anyways.
boi98229
9/15/21, 6:59 AM
I have a black leather jacket I love just as much as this David/Danny, but mine lacks the magic of Danny's jacket...and this story. The leather smell that permeated my room as I read your story was both magical and arousing. Thanks!
boi98229
9/15/21, 4:59 AM
Not normally much into superhero stories, but i really enjoyed this one because of the way the dominance and control played out. i really enjoyed the back and forth, but the way the Manta Ray used intelligent techniques to establish his advantage, and followed up with bondage, close quarters and isolation, sensory deprivation, powerful physical pleasure, and brainwashing techniques all created an undeniably powerful and unassailable dominating force.
9/15/21, 4:01 AM
me enecantó
9/11/21, 10:54 AM
Love this! The introduction to the characters and the buildup to Chui submitting to Trey was phenomenal. Would love to learn how they got there, and maybe even see Trey abuse his position in fun ways with a mindless Chui. Excited for future and hopefully longer chapters! This eventual series looks to be a winner.

Conversion Enthusiast
9/15/21, 2:38 AM
@Zanifornia Thanks! Hoping to have a long enough timeline to be able to integrate some different dynamics down the line! I'm stuck on one or two more parts for the next chapter but hoping to post up sooner over later!